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Smooth Rain

all people love rain desert or equator men rain is lovely smooth

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/28/2024 8:42:00 AM

I agree...something soothing about the sound of rain.

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 1/30/2024 8:48:00 PM

Thank you!

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/26/2024 7:00:00 PM

Dear Abdullah, your Senryu is beautifully expressed. I adore your last line "rain is lovely smooth". Rain is rhythmic, rain is cleansing, rain is a gift from above. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 1/30/2024 8:48:00 PM

Thank you dear lovely friend Susan! Warmest wishes to you too :-) Have a wonderful day ~AA

Silent One

Date: 1/26/2024 2:07:00 PM

Raun is mercy...

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 1/26/2024 2:28:00 PM

Exactly! Thank you Mr. Silent!