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(yalto) Submitted on 09/03/2023

so gentle, like a mother cooing to her newborn. like the soft wind that... sets the blade of grass to swaying. much like the warm breeze of summer, so smooth like velvet; that's how your gentle touch feels on my skin...and soul!

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Date: 5/15/2020 11:06:00 PM
Smooth And Finishing Beautifully Architectured Bravo On You first place Win
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/16/2020 7:53:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Gideon:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 5/15/2020 2:16:00 PM
Very smooth, loaded with image, worthy of your high finish with your own invented form. Lots to celebrate. Congratulations.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/15/2020 3:42:00 PM
Thank you very very, Greg:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 5/13/2020 4:26:00 PM
Very nice Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/13/2020 5:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, John:-)
Date: 5/12/2020 4:50:00 PM
Always a lovely form! A beauty!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/12/2020 8:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)

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