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Smooth Like Velvet

so gentle,
   like a mother
      cooing
         to her newborn.

            like the soft wind that...
               sets the blade
                  of grass
                     to swaying.

                        much like
                           the warm breeze
                              of summer,
                                 so smooth like velvet;

                                    that's how your gentle touch
                                       feels
                                          on my skin...and soul!

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Gideon Idudje Date: 5/15/2020 11:06:00 PM Smooth And Finishing Beautifully Architectured Bravo On You first place Win Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 5/16/2020 7:53:00 AM Thank you very much indeed, Gideon:-) Most appreciated.

Greg Gaul Date: 5/15/2020 2:16:00 PM Very smooth, loaded with image, worthy of your high finish with your own invented form. Lots to celebrate. Congratulations. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 5/15/2020 3:42:00 PM Thank you very very, Greg:-) Most appreciated.

John Hamilton Date: 5/13/2020 4:26:00 PM Very nice Edward! Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 5/13/2020 5:16:00 PM Thank you so much, John:-)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/12/2020 4:50:00 PM Always a lovely form! A beauty! Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 5/12/2020 8:29:00 PM Thank you very much, Kim:-)