Smooth As Silk

Marriage, smooth as silk, young girls hope ~ Bumps and bruises descending its slopes

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Winged Warrior

Date: 7/8/2019 9:50:00 AM

Marriage...just like a rose...it's petals alluring, it's smell intoxicating and it's thorns stabbing (backstabbing that is lol)...great read Gersh...sending a cold shower lol...^WW^ :o)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2019 12:48:00 PM

Interesting angle...Hadn't looked at things this way...Thanks for your perspective on this little ditty. Best wishes, gw

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/8/2019 4:50:00 AM

So very true Gershon, we all start off cruising gently then the odd storm knocks us off course. Tom.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2019 12:47:00 PM

Oh, that odd storm can knock us for a loop, eh?! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/7/2019 11:00:00 PM

Delicately done, and well thought out, my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2019 12:47:00 PM

Thanks for realizing that actually was some thought put into this one... (LOL. I try to think, anyway). Appreciate the comment, Caren