Mark Koplin Poet Free verse

Smoke Wisps

Passion burned brighter
than candle flames
licking shadows on the wall.
A tongue sipped sweet nectar
from cream filled silken folds
that quivered with each libidinous stroke.
Like wisps of smoke, her whimpers rose
aroused by sensual flickering.
Embers smoldering
until luxuria was sated.


Some Kind of Sensual Poetry Contest
sponsored by Nette Onclaud
6/3/2020 -- 44 words

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 28, 2020 at 1:57 PM Hello Mark, congratulation on your win .I am proud of you. Enjoy your day my friend. Mark Koplin June 28, 2020 at 5:44 PM Thank you

Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 9:26 AM This is a great sensuous write! Congratulations on your win Mark Mark Koplin June 8, 2020 at 11:18 AM Thanks

Jan Allison June 7, 2020 at 5:50 PM many congrats Mark I think I would have placed this higher. I didnt bother with the contest as sensual poetry is not my scene but you did it so beautifully:-) hugs Jan xx Mark Koplin June 8, 2020 at 11:18 AM Why thank ya Jan!

John Lawless June 4, 2020 at 7:34 AM Be right back....gotta go take a cold shower.. You put the "sin" in sensuous Mark. Great write Mark Koplin June 4, 2020 at 8:01 AM Thanks John!

Lin Lane June 3, 2020 at 5:21 PM What a sizzling write, Mark. I appreciate its sultry sensuality. Lin Lane June 3, 2020 at 5:54 PM All is well with me, Mark. Thanks for asking. I'm staying clear of the soup, only peeking in once in a while. How nice that I've seen one from you and Jan to comment upon today. Hope you and your family are staying safe. Mark Koplin June 3, 2020 at 5:35 PM It's nice and steamy isn't it;} So good to see you here my friend. It's been far too long. How's life treating you?

Jan Allison June 3, 2020 at 3:47 PM Wow, those lines are dripping with desire, Mark! That pun was intended, but the scene really is written with a great sense of passion. I won't be entering the contest I find themes of a sensual nature beyond my comfort zone but you have nailed it!!:-) hugs Jan xx Mark Koplin June 3, 2020 at 4:30 PM back at ya sister!