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Smoke Wisps

Passion burned brighter than candle flames licking shadows on the wall. A tongue sipped sweet nectar from cream filled silken folds that quivered with each libidinous stroke. Like wisps of smoke, her whimpers rose aroused by sensual flickering. Embers smoldering until luxuria was sated. Some Kind of Sensual Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud 6/3/2020 -- 44 words

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/28/2020 1:57:00 PM

Hello Mark, congratulation on your win .I am proud of you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Mark Koplin
Date: 6/28/2020 5:44:00 PM

Thank you

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/8/2020 9:26:00 AM

This is a great sensuous write! Congratulations on your win Mark

Mark Koplin
Date: 6/8/2020 11:18:00 AM

Thanks

Jan Allison

Date: 6/7/2020 5:50:00 PM

many congrats Mark I think I would have placed this higher. I didnt bother with the contest as sensual poetry is not my scene but you did it so beautifully:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin
Date: 6/8/2020 11:18:00 AM

Why thank ya Jan!

John Lawless

Date: 6/4/2020 7:34:00 AM

Be right back....gotta go take a cold shower.. You put the "sin" in sensuous Mark. Great write

Mark Koplin
Date: 6/4/2020 8:01:00 AM

Thanks John!

Lin Lane

Date: 6/3/2020 5:21:00 PM

What a sizzling write, Mark. I appreciate its sultry sensuality.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/3/2020 5:54:00 PM

All is well with me, Mark. Thanks for asking. I'm staying clear of the soup, only peeking in once in a while. How nice that I've seen one from you and Jan to comment upon today. Hope you and your family are staying safe.

Mark Koplin
Date: 6/3/2020 5:35:00 PM

It's nice and steamy isn't it;} So good to see you here my friend. It's been far too long. How's life treating you?

Jan Allison

Date: 6/3/2020 3:47:00 PM

Wow, those lines are dripping with desire, Mark! That pun was intended, but the scene really is written with a great sense of passion. I won't be entering the contest I find themes of a sensual nature beyond my comfort zone but you have nailed it!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin
Date: 6/3/2020 4:30:00 PM

back at ya sister!