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Smoke Clouds

My master's shaft of light is forbidding;
Still, I have enough sense left to keep hidden.

If he cannot find me, he will not hurt me;
my silence, a bold plea for safety.

Beneath the dank hay, prayer makes perfect sense -
what he does not know, my only defense.

His flashlight flickers while making its arc
trying to root out the truth in the dark;

The battery dies; my brain gives birth to flight;
the barn door clicks shut, a plan starts to ignite.

The lock holds his hope for my safekeeping
when he returns, I will not be sleeping.

Knowing not to wait for his light's return,
I kindle the hayloft to cause a slow burn.

Hoping the dampness slows down a fast start,
this new shaft of light warms my anxious heart.

Sure of his soon return with dog and with cane
I wait my escape from flogging's sharp pain.

Hearing both my foes and the handle’s quick jolt,
as they head for the blaze, it's my chance to bolt.

Latching the barn door, ere I make my flight,
dark clouds cover the moon, shielding its light.

Headed to unknown beginnings, I now succumb
Everything's behind me, everything's become.


Author’s Notes:  last line is a reference to Tap Turns on the Water by CCS (Alexis Korner, John Cameron)


February 13, 2013
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Richards Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Trying to root out the truth in the dark.........(love that line!).....this is a wonderful couplet/story! I feel the anxiety.
A   Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 9:30 PM
Reason, stopping by to enjoy all of Seren's "Shaft of light " winners.. Congratulations with your awesome poem. xox~ PD
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Roberts Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 11:43 PM
what an awesome story you've told, a very different take on the contest, many congrats on your win Reason
Squyres Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 9:50 PM
This gave me goosebumps...what a tale you have spun here...(hopeing a tale) Escape granted !! Enjoyed. Congrats on your win.
Jones Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 9:15 PM
This is an awesome original poem..congratulations
Roberts Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Well done Reason thnks for entering my contest.....Seren
Richards Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 5:43 PM
What an interesting, and clever story told in this terrific couplet!! Congratulations on your win!
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