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Smoke

A blind light crashes 
through bar windows.

Since they began to talk
her breasts had moved 
to a small apartment in his head.
The smoke from her cigarette
shaped words
into sensuous motes.

He imagines her lungs.
They are green-leaf not black.
Inside the bronchi and alveolar
sylph's teasingly beckon
out of a spongy foliage.

Votive clouds lather red lips.
Words flare dark clefts of desire.
Throats assume vapory feelers
inside a filtering breath.

He needs her addictively,
a blood craving
that seeks her as an inhalation.

There’s a strung-out intimacy 
between them.
Eye’s smother, and blur
as they absorb each other.

Soon they will meet
upon an in-between world
where each visual breath
forms fumy erotic dreams.

Meanwhile, a midday daze 
permeates their smolder 
as they sightlessly
light another.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/19/2019 7:14:00 PM
Many thanks Darlene, sorry to say 'eerie' comes naturally to me. Nice to touch base with you also.
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Date: 8/19/2019 1:45:00 PM
Hello Eric Ashford, this is an eerie poem. I like it. Also nice to meet you. have a nice day my friend.
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