Smiling Eyes

Congratulations on your win Annalise in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

adorable , especially the third senryu, congrats on your win in the contest Annalise

oh,yes, i remember,yours is the chocolate swim! Love it, congratulations.

Annalise I loved this one the first time I read it.. Congratulations on your win and have an awesome weekend.. love Wilma

Wonderful ending here Annalise!Congrats on your win--kashinath

Love that last stanza. 'Swimming in milk chocolates with no life jacket. Wonderful string Senryu, Annalise. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Love these Annalise, yes and like all the others love the third one, in fact this is a very profound statement you make here, awesome, congrats. Harry

coming back here to congratulate you Annalise! this was really an enjoyable entry-- awesome swimming in milk chocolate! Super congrats again :)

Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear Anna.

This is a cute one Annalise. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Congratulations on your win...Sara

Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of Michael, Annalise. I hope you have noted down my email I gave you in one of my comments

from smiles to sparks!! CHEERS for winning big in this tourney, anna... superrr stuff! ;) hugggs

I knew this would be a winner, Annalise. Congratulations, hon! Love, Carolyn

Congrats Annalise on your wonderful winning poem in Michael's contest with this exciting entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv ..happy weekend too..

Congrats my dear on your win in my contest...luv Michael

oooh, what a cool thought, to be swimming in milk chocolate . YUM!!! great image with that gaze, sweetie.

Love the last Senryui - the ecstacy of chocolate. Love, dave

Quite a dreamy write Annalise, loved it. Good luck for the contest, hope your weekend's been a good one, love Wilma

You don't need a life jacket to drown in love, Annalise. I remember how it felt when I first saw my husband and he really did take my breath away. This is a wonderful entry for Michael's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

This is such a sweet and romantic series of senryu, Annalise, & really like that "swimming in milk chocolate" -- I think with eyes like that, you can just swim forever! :) wish you the best in the contest :)

A sweet dreamy Senryu Annalise, it's delightful. Good luck in Michael's contest....:)

swimming in milk chocolates with no life jacket ...how unique and original are your lines Annalise.. great expressions to compliment the other lines ..good luck my friend in the contest.. am glad I am not the judge of this one ..Michael will be so blown away with your lines.. and so many great entries for competition but this one is charming luv..