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Smiling As He Fell

today my form walked along a different route events dictated choice doing what did then suit ‘twas a strange combine of angst along with bliss blown like a leaf in storms I yet found nothing amiss darkness cloaked darkness but as self-luminescent soul as stillness amidst the chaos in the abyss too I felt whole

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Date: 6/28/2023 3:26:00 PM
....nice write....'smiled as s/he fell'.....in luminescent stillness thru the darkness... ....so peaceful.....stan
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Date: 6/28/2023 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, sand
Date: 6/28/2023 10:04:00 AM
I can not imagine you writing such a nice poem on a fall, Whenever I fall, I end up in ICU. Nice poem.
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Date: 6/28/2023 7:47:00 PM
:)
Date: 6/28/2023 8:17:00 AM
I fell too, but I'm not smiling. Intelligent poem.
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Date: 6/28/2023 8:44:00 AM
It is the way we respond to what unfolds, Victor. If an arrow pierces space, the void remains unperturbed

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