Amanda Moore Poet Tetractys

Smiles Or Frowns a Double Tetractys

Laughs
Turn to
Child like smiles
When you’re with me
Smiles filled with joy when we have time alone
Sadness reclaims the smiles when you’re away
Frowns find their way
From my face
To my 
Heart 
  AgMoore© 07/20/11 










 for the Smiles and frowns contest (Tetractys )  by Amanda Moore 

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Carol Eastman June 12, 2012 at 12:37 PM Great featured poem. Excellent work.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 25, 2011 at 11:42 AM This sure warms the heart, Amanda-- sounds like a wonderful person, beautiful message in your tetractys -- really liked your take on the challenge :) Oh shucks, I just saw Susan's comment below...I definitely think this is a winner too! Plus I love your attitude about writing for contests! Way to go for you :D Amanda Moore July 25, 2011 at 1:54 PM Nikko you're awesome thanks so much! Winning is a bonus but the true pleasure is in the writing and the challenge, AND the great community here!

Black Eyed Susan July 23, 2011 at 10:50 AM I was looking for your name on the winner's list and I couldn't believe it wasn't there! yours is just as good, if not better, than some of the winners. i feel like you got gipped. anyway, just know that someone out there, me, loves this! Amanda Moore July 24, 2011 at 12:05 AM Oh Susan thank you so much it's not about the winning it's about the writing! ((((hugs))))

Carolyn Devonshire July 22, 2011 at 9:55 AM When we are separated from someone who is the light of our life, this is just how it feels, Amanda. Wonderful entry for the Smiles and Frowns contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn Amanda Moore July 24, 2011 at 12:03 AM Carolyn so true, fortunately I am not writing from experience and I thank you for the well wishes!

Caryl Ramsdale July 22, 2011 at 9:20 AM Amanda: The Tetractys poetry form is one of my favorites and you made it work for what could be the winning entry. Thanks for the delightful comment. Caryl Amanda Moore July 23, 2011 at 11:51 PM Caryl thank you so much I love this form as well!

Sidney Hall Mad Poet July 21, 2011 at 8:56 PM Wow Amanda, this is definately a winner. thanks for your comment Amanda Moore July 23, 2011 at 11:49 PM Sidney thank you for the vote of confidence!

Susan Buchel July 21, 2011 at 6:50 PM wow. this would be a challenge to compose, delightful product! Amanda Moore July 21, 2011 at 7:10 PM Thanks so Much Susan, it is not really that hard when working with syllables you'd have fun with this!

James Fraser July 21, 2011 at 1:44 PM Wonderful Tetractys Amanda, a joy to read :) Amanda Moore July 21, 2011 at 2:04 PM James thanks I might have to do a nothter one they're lots of fun!

Black Eyed Susan July 21, 2011 at 8:38 AM this is awesome! especially the ending! I don't know how he wouldn't like this :) Amanda Moore July 21, 2011 at 2:01 PM Thanks Susan You're sweet!

Doris Culverhouse July 20, 2011 at 5:51 PM enjoyed reading today....sounds like a winner!! Amanda Moore July 20, 2011 at 8:00 PM Oh Doris thanks this was a lot of fun to wrote!