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Smiles From Heaven

Bright Orbs Open Seams in sky Heaven’s fine fabric Shows us smiles from loved ones who passed They guide us through the dark night, helping us move forward Letting us know there is another life beyond the one we struggle to endure on Earth’s plane Fibonacci for Rob’s contest, written March 14, 2015

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Emile Pinet

Date: 4/29/2015 12:21:00 PM

The story like quality brings a friendly feeling to the reader and we can almost see the smiles in our mind. Emile.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/12/2015 7:35:00 PM

A truly inspiring poem not hindered in the slightest by the fine form!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/14/2015 9:20:00 PM

Very nice inspiring write. 7 Blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2015 7:39:00 PM

A nice religious one for Rob. he should really like it! Loved the seams in sky line and heaven's fine fabric!

John Squires

Date: 3/14/2015 5:54:00 PM

Not only is the form well done but the poetry is well done as well. Enjoyable write...thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/14/2015 4:20:00 PM

I like the positivity that flows throughout the whole poem, Carolyn. Impressed by "Heaven's fine fabric". Believing in after-life is an incentive for those who may falter while journeying. Top marks to you...as usual. Love & Hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2015 2:09:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 3/14/2015 1:14:00 PM

a beautiful uplifting write Carolyn - wonderful to think of them of smiles of those who have passed:-) Hugs jan xx good luck in the contest:-) xx 7 xx