Smile

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Spectacular line

Mirroring pure joy divine

In one's heart and soul

Letting happiness extol

Expression is genuine

Contest: TANKACROSTIC Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich 05/16/2021

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Howard Kerr

Date: 6/14/2021 9:56:00 AM

Hi Alexis Y, I’m really impressed by your entry. Well done. Howard

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/8/2021 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love your "Smile" write. Enjoy your win with blessings.............

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/6/2021 9:17:00 PM

Wow! Congratulations!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/6/2021 4:20:00 PM

Hi Alexis, I'm back with warmest congratulations on your win, with this fantastic entry. Have a nice evening, Evelyn :D

Marilene Evans

Date: 6/6/2021 2:15:00 PM

Such a sweet and short poem. Congratulations, Alexis. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2021 12:09:00 PM

This was such a creative expression of SMILE, alexis. Loved it. Congrats on your win.

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2021 12:56:00 PM

Hi Andrea, You hosting a fun and creative contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis

Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2021 6:00:00 AM

This is an excellent entry, Alexis. You managed to combine all three requirements: acrostic, tanka and rhyme! A good choice of topic, too. ~ Warm regards // paul

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 5/18/2021 3:43:00 PM

This one brought a smile to my mug, Alexis! Excellent entry for the contest and worthy of a top win! Glad you enjoyed Gas Pains (Nothing personal - ha) Bob H

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/18/2021 11:20:00 AM

Wow a tanka and an acrostic a beautiful smiling two in one, artsy poetic definition of a smile. Kudos!! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.