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Smile

Crying
	drinking sadness
		dieing


Feel
	every smile
		miles away


		Call
	waiting
 and waiting



	Fade
		sail away
drown but not today


Kill 
		sinking thoughts
	yesterday


Knife
			intrudes in flesh
	red


Bleeding
	not a comedy
		lifeless


Secrets
		dreams
screams


No more breath
			no more
		smile


Rigorous
 		shall be Mortie's
				critique

yours truly
	rick
Sanchez

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2018 5:33:00 PM

gosh, the rigor mortis thing got by me!~! I don't know that reference to his show either but I sure enjoyed seeing a poem from you again Arthur. Please stay around!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/16/2018 6:19:00 PM

artistic... inspiring... my i have missed u

Darren White

Date: 6/11/2018 12:57:00 PM

Rigor, Mortis ;)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/9/2018 8:25:00 PM

you always know how to weave your words to paint a canvas... hugs eve

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/9/2018 7:24:00 PM

Tactfully composed with poetic touch.I admire.

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/9/2018 3:01:00 PM

Cleverly crafted Arthur, what a guy that Morty. Well done...

Tim Smith

Date: 6/9/2018 2:18:00 PM

No dieing the wool here...love it Art

Paul Callus

Date: 6/9/2018 10:08:00 AM

This leads me to the Rick & Morty comedy. I also agree with Jan re the play on words ... rigor mortis! Creativity between the lines. Regards // paul