Arthur Vaso Poet Free verse

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Smile

Smile

Crying
	drinking sadness
		dieing


Feel
	every smile
		miles away


		Call
	waiting
 and waiting



	Fade
		sail away
drown but not today


Kill 
		sinking thoughts
	yesterday


Knife
			intrudes in flesh
	red


Bleeding
	not a comedy
		lifeless


Secrets
		dreams
screams


No more breath
			no more
		smile


Rigorous
 		shall be Mortie's
				critique

yours truly
	rick
Sanchez

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Andrea Dietrich June 19, 2018 at 5:33 PM gosh, the rigor mortis thing got by me!~! I don't know that reference to his show either but I sure enjoyed seeing a poem from you again Arthur. Please stay around!!

Casarah Nance June 16, 2018 at 6:19 PM artistic... inspiring... my i have missed u

Darren White June 11, 2018 at 12:57 PM Rigor, Mortis ;)

Eve Roper June 9, 2018 at 8:25 PM you always know how to weave your words to paint a canvas... hugs eve

Anisha Dutta June 9, 2018 at 7:24 PM Tactfully composed with poetic touch.I admire.

Charlie Smith June 9, 2018 at 3:01 PM Cleverly crafted Arthur, what a guy that Morty. Well done...

Tim Smith June 9, 2018 at 2:18 PM No dieing the wool here...love it Art

Paul Callus June 9, 2018 at 10:08 AM This leads me to the Rick & Morty comedy. I also agree with Jan re the play on words ... rigor mortis! Creativity between the lines. Regards // paul

Probir Gupta June 9, 2018 at 8:09 AM I liked this staccato style of writing free verse ... lovely ...

Arturo Michael June 9, 2018 at 4:07 AM Smile's a powerful word...I enjoyed the poem but you left me wondering ... who's RS?

Jan Allison June 9, 2018 at 3:14 AM Superb free verse, I love the way you formatted the poem - clever word play with rigorous Mortie's!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lyric Man June 9, 2018 at 12:39 AM Beautifully composed, Arthur!