Smelly Me -Song Lyric Contest

Stop buzzing round my head bee
I am not a flower
Message understood
I'll go and have a shower

I know I 'm smelling sweaty
This I must agree
Working in the garden
Has made a smelly me.

Buzz off and feed now
flowers over there
Go and fill on pollen
I'm a gardener that cares


Sing to my old man's a dustman
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y7GeZ3YmONw.    Wait til he starts the my old man part 

Penned 9 July 2013

Contest Song Lyric
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 7/13/2013 6:49:00 PM
You to those Bees! lol....got the beat flowing as I was reading your lyric .....Shaz
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Date: 7/11/2013 3:43:00 AM
HAHA!...Go pollinate a flower or something you stupid bee!...GREAT lyric Seren - Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/11/2013 9:35:00 AM
Hi Tim thx for stopping by, the traffic is very slow as you can see lol ....Seren
Date: 7/9/2013 7:15:00 PM
This write is totally awesome my friend! You have written a spectacular poem here Seren! I truly loved reading this delightful piece this evening! Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/11/2013 9:36:00 AM
Hi Russell without your comments, my poems wouldnt have any ....Seren
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