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Smelly Me -Song Lyric Contest

Stop buzzing round my head bee I am not a flower Message understood I'll go and have a shower I know I 'm smelling sweaty This I must agree Working in the garden Has made a smelly me. Buzz off and feed now flowers over there Go and fill on pollen I'm a gardener that cares Sing to my old man's a dustman http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y7GeZ3YmONw. Wait til he starts the my old man part Penned 9 July 2013 Contest Song Lyric

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Shaz Cheesman

Date: 7/13/2013 6:49:00 PM

You to those Bees! lol....got the beat flowing as I was reading your lyric .....Shaz

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/11/2013 3:43:00 AM

HAHA!...Go pollinate a flower or something you stupid bee!...GREAT lyric Seren - Tim

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/11/2013 9:35:00 AM

Hi Tim thx for stopping by, the traffic is very slow as you can see lol ....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/9/2013 7:15:00 PM

This write is totally awesome my friend! You have written a spectacular poem here Seren! I truly loved reading this delightful piece this evening! Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/11/2013 9:36:00 AM

Hi Russell without your comments, my poems wouldnt have any ....Seren