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Smell of Jasmine

She hands me the flowers with a shy smile, that pretty little girl of nine, stop by their shop each Friday for a while, to buy woven strings of jasmine. She is always there by her mother’s side, little fingers deftly weaving, in two and threes she ties jasmine buds wide, she waves to me as am leaving. Jasmine adorns women's hair on Friday, a tradition in Hindu homes, For wife and daughter I buy on my way, for their jet black hair neatly combed. as years roll by old memories I weave, like white jasmine buds on a string, to university my daughter leaves, to be a doctor on her wings. twenty-fifth birthday we throw a big bash, family and friends come to dine, for food, sweets and drinks spend limitless cash, and a few baskets of jasmine. candles and cakes and happy, cheer and laughs, her medical friends wish and sing, one of them I recognised half and half, once a girl with jasmine string.
Written 24/06/2021 Surprise me poetry contest Charles Messina sponsored 10,8,10,8 syllables abab rhyme sequence

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Date: 7/23/2021 11:17:00 AM
Your poem brought back memories of Jasmine flowers and their dreamy fragrant.. All the very best to your daughter in her medical career!!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/23/2021 11:59:00 AM
Thanks Smita! Pleased you liked my poetry. I shall pass on your good wishes to her! Regards
Date: 6/26/2021 4:09:00 AM
aH, You knocked at the door of my heart and then opened it with your beautiful tender words Chris. Your amazing, :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/26/2021 4:34:00 AM
Thanks Mystic! delighted with your kind words! pleased you like it!:)
Date: 6/25/2021 4:50:00 AM
Took me to streets of madhurai where we find lot of jasmine flowers. In Thane too at places we find girls expertly weaving them. I agree anybody can become a doctor if hardwork and intelligence is combined.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/25/2021 6:38:00 AM
Thanks Rama. Something so common and wonderful in India is hard to get in the UK! I miss that side of the culture.
Date: 6/24/2021 2:03:00 AM
Wow!!! Lovely climax... Life is full of surprises... So beautifully described the Indians' culture and your daughter's achievement... Good luck in the contest...
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 6/24/2021 5:21:00 AM
So true!!!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/24/2021 2:19:00 AM
Thanks Supraja! India is one of the few countries in the world where a flower vendor’s daughter can dream of becoming a doctor!
Date: 6/24/2021 1:43:00 AM
It's a small world Krish, love the surprise ending. Good luck in the contest.. Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/24/2021 2:20:00 AM
Thanks Tom!! Based on many such true incidents of children from humble backgrounds making it big in life.

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