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Small Yellow Sun

small yellow sun fostering life on the earth maiden of stars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/22/2011 5:43:00 AM
Robert, this is beautiful. It is a wonder indeed that such a small sun up there can foster so much life down here. Love this
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Date: 1/19/2011 4:26:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku Robert!Goodluck in the contest-kashinath
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Date: 1/17/2011 6:39:00 PM
Robert, this is a lovely one:) Thanks for your congrats on "Avatar", Robert. I saw Avatar in 3D, that was amazing though some of the special effects were dizzying... the story line is great too! Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:26:00 PM
Very good, Mr. Pettit. Especially your last line. Love, Deb
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:10:00 PM
you are so right, wonderful example of such discription in so few words. Harry
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:07:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this very descriptive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:58:00 PM
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:18:00 PM
wonderful Robert, beautiful colours.
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Date: 1/17/2011 1:48:00 PM
So enjoyed your bright sunshine today... wonderful words to read...
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Date: 1/17/2011 1:15:00 PM
Very awesome image orf maiden of the stars, enjoyed the write, Robert
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Date: 1/17/2011 1:09:00 PM
Awesome, Robert~ how are you. delighted to read your wonderful haiku. ~skat~
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Date: 1/17/2011 12:46:00 PM
I like this a lot Robert...Very nicely done! Christine
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