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Small Life

Marooned, small life swims in a rockpool flung up and left high on the stretched reach of last night's storm. The world that holds them has shrunk to a size no bigger than a bucket. The morning sun singles out the forms and anoints each with a dab of light. I watch and swirl a finger as if to stir the motion of a running wave and break the stagnating still that has settled here. This pool is too far away from the normal wash of tides to be replenished. Cut off from the sea, it will evaporate. Each turn of a finger through the water seems to wind a thought tighter around my head. When I stop, an image on the surface of the pool slowly coagulates into me. Just below the glaze, life withdraws a little further into its shrinking world, separated from the sea.

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Date: 5/16/2023 2:35:00 PM
Lost and languishing in isolation's tide pool. Not necessarily what you may have been going for, Paul, but that’s what it evokes in me. Cheers!
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2023 3:16:00 PM
Quite a perceptive call Mark. The poem points to the negative impact of agoraphobia, a face that I am familiar with. Very much appreciate your comments...value.
Date: 5/16/2023 9:05:00 AM
Wonderful thought provoking write Paul. "Separated from the sea" such a evocative phrase that sets off some kind of pang for something I can't place. I perhaps miss the point or deeper meaning but I am transported by reading your words. (A small part of me wishing to transport myself with a bucket to refill the rockpool until the tide comes in)
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2023 3:27:00 PM
Unfortunately I had no bucket and the pool was beyond the tide mark....had to let nature and fate play the game out. Many thanks for your kind comments and getting into the poem. For sea, read people...probably explains it. Take care.
Date: 5/16/2023 5:20:00 AM
I'll admit, there are times I feel as if Ive been separated for the sea (of humanity) cut off from reality. Sometimes its nice. other times not so much. A great read as always Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2023 6:06:00 AM
Thanks Daniel. Poem has an undercurrent of agoraphobia I guess...crept in. Again appreciate yr kind words and support my friend.

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