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Small Life

Marooned, small life swims
in a rockpool flung up
and left high on the stretched
reach of last night's storm. 
The world that holds them
has shrunk to a size 
no bigger than a bucket.
The morning sun singles out
the forms and anoints each
with a dab of light. 

I watch and swirl a finger
as if to stir the motion 
of a running wave and break
the stagnating still 
that has settled here. 
This pool is too far away
from the normal wash
of tides to be replenished.
Cut off from the sea,
it will evaporate.

Each turn of a finger
through the water
seems to wind a thought
tighter around my head.
When I stop, an image 
on the surface of the pool
slowly coagulates into me.
Just below the glaze,
life withdraws a little further 
into its shrinking world, 
separated from the sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/16/2023 2:35:00 PM
Lost and languishing in isolation's tide pool. Not necessarily what you may have been going for, Paul, but that’s what it evokes in me. Cheers!
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2023 3:16:00 PM
Quite a perceptive call Mark. The poem points to the negative impact of agoraphobia, a face that I am familiar with. Very much appreciate your comments...value.
Date: 5/16/2023 5:20:00 AM
I'll admit, there are times I feel as if Ive been separated for the sea (of humanity) cut off from reality. Sometimes its nice. other times not so much. A great read as always Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2023 6:06:00 AM
Thanks Daniel. Poem has an undercurrent of agoraphobia I guess...crept in. Again appreciate yr kind words and support my friend.

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