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Small-Minded

Her smug smile smacked of smarminess, Smouldering with self-smiting spite, Her smartness smothered by smooth smirks Was smashed to smoky smithereens. 12/03/17

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2018 11:08:00 PM

Nicely done, Jo, hugs Eve

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/4/2018 9:35:00 AM

Wonderful Alliteration, Jo Happy New Year.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/3/2018 10:27:00 AM

I am happy to read your poetry--very well written, Jo!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2017 2:04:00 PM

- Dear Jo :) - My best wishes for a peacefull and lovely new year, and I thank you for your friendship through the year 2017 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn

Date: 12/28/2017 4:00:00 PM

Poems Not Fade Away Am blinded by bright light God made, In His son, so I will sit in the shade; And pray, Without delay; My poems away won't let them fade. Jim Horn

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/26/2017 5:21:00 AM

Smashing, little sister!

James Inman

Date: 12/24/2017 3:02:00 AM

Smooooth write Jo. It would be interesting to know the story behind it.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/23/2017 3:24:00 PM

You must be as busy as I am Jo. I hope you have a beautiful Christmas and a wonderful New Year my friend. xxoo : )

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/19/2017 7:44:00 AM

Wow to 'smarminess' - long time no hear or see 'smarminess', what a great word to pull out, Jo. Each line is a readers 's' party, wonderful job! All the best ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2017 8:21:00 PM

Hey no win on this one? Back to admire it!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/16/2017 9:51:00 AM

Great alliterative poem describing a truly ugly-spirited person! Janice

Pipping Stars

Date: 12/11/2017 7:38:00 AM

cool s wordings ... this piece gave me an s word ... smile ... fin I may ... superbly sequestered ... ha ha ... that last s word just popped in my head don't even know what it means ... ha ha ... that's a bonus for me ... be really cool if it jives with your write ... ain't been all that inspired as of late ... this one is great ...

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/9/2017 3:43:00 PM

Nicely done, Jo. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/9/2017 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations Jo ! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/8/2017 7:41:00 PM

Oh, I like the message for this write, Jo, congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/8/2017 4:53:00 PM

I really loved this one Jo!:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/8/2017 4:17:00 PM

ohh, well expressed with great use of alliterartion... nd so it is, jo... huggs

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 12/7/2017 9:59:00 AM

WoW! I love the energy in this piece. Well written.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 12/6/2017 8:56:00 AM

I love alliteration and this is awesomely crafted.. Could relate a bit to it. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, hope u will my latest too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2017 3:37:00 PM

Oh, Jo, this one can do double duty as alliteration AND you could put People after it and enter it in the People contest! Good job. I really dislike this type of person.