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Slumbering On Earth

A beautiful girl everyone said, relatives hushed in reverence Sweet baby who never made a sound, surrounded by love Slumbering on earth as she watched our reactions from heaven. Perfectly formed tiny fists and pretty cheeks, gorgeous coloring Trevina never opened her eyes yet impacted our lives forever Written 8-23-2019 Contest: 5 Lines on Anything Sponsors: Dear Heart and Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 8/31/2019 10:14:00 PM
Caren, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this emotional Free Verse, it really touched my heart ~
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/1/2019 9:55:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I am so thrilled with my win. Glad you let me know.
Date: 8/29/2019 3:53:00 AM
- A touching writing, Caren - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/29/2019 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 8/28/2019 3:12:00 PM
Slumbering happy beginning, unexpected dramatic ending. That's what I love. Congrats, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/28/2019 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Kurt.

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