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Slumbering On Earth

A beautiful girl everyone said, relatives hushed in reverence
Sweet baby who never made a sound, surrounded by love
Slumbering on earth as she watched our reactions from heaven. 
Perfectly formed tiny fists and pretty cheeks, gorgeous coloring
Trevina never opened her eyes yet impacted our lives forever

Written 8-23-2019
Contest: 5 Lines on Anything
Sponsors: Dear Heart and Wiishkobi Ode

Copyright © Caren Krutsinger | Year Posted 2019

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Constance La France Date: 8/31/2019 10:14:00 PM Caren, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this emotional Free Verse, it really touched my heart ~ Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/1/2019 9:55:00 AM Thank you my friend. I am so thrilled with my win. Glad you let me know.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/29/2019 3:53:00 AM - A touching writing, Caren - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 8/29/2019 7:43:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise.

Kurt Ravidas Date: 8/28/2019 3:12:00 PM Slumbering happy beginning, unexpected dramatic ending. That's what I love. Congrats, Caren. Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 8/28/2019 3:20:00 PM Thank you Kurt.