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snail climbing a hill sees flourishing apple tree ... will find it next year One Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Date written: 04/19/2021

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Date: 5/3/2021 6:48:00 PM
Hahaha... A great Haiku
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Date: 4/27/2021 6:43:00 PM
"Will find it next year" Brilliant! You're a haiku master.
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Date: 4/23/2021 4:34:00 AM
Never thought of a snails journey to find food before, what a tedious chore. A really good Haiku Victor... Belle
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Date: 4/21/2021 7:30:00 AM
Shame poor snail, he will die of hunger till next year. a great Haiku though. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 4/20/2021 3:53:00 AM
Patience in the way of a snail.
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Date: 4/19/2021 10:20:00 PM
Love this Victor. I like snails actually. Such quiet, harmless little creatures. Nice job and love the pic. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/19/2021 7:03:00 PM
Slow road to Apple. Great haiku Victor
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Date: 4/19/2021 1:40:00 PM
Now this is s real haiku...nice one victor
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Date: 4/19/2021 12:20:00 PM
A cute one Victor!
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Date: 4/19/2021 10:50:00 AM
Your charming haiku captures the interest and imagination, Victor. It also has humor. Best wishes for the contest. :D
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Date: 4/19/2021 7:02:00 AM
At least he keeps on tugging. LOL..I think he will eat his way up the hill, arrive late and decide to go back down. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 4/19/2021 5:19:00 AM
Slower than slow--your poem brings that image alive.
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Date: 4/19/2021 3:13:00 AM
your imagery made me smile, they do travel so slowly !:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/19/2021 2:55:00 AM
Now they've captured that very poignant moment in time, and I love the scenery; I hope this will be a top winner. Have a great day, dear friend.
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Date: 4/19/2021 1:39:00 AM
Love the image Victor, hope he doesn't starve before he gets there. Tom
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