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Haiku 10 - Slow Snail

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snail climbing a hill
sees flourishing apple tree ...
will find it next year


One Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
Date written: 04/19/2021

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/3/2021 6:48:00 PM

Hahaha... A great Haiku

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 4/27/2021 6:43:00 PM

"Will find it next year" Brilliant! You're a haiku master.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/23/2021 4:34:00 AM

Never thought of a snails journey to find food before, what a tedious chore. A really good Haiku Victor... Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/21/2021 7:30:00 AM

Shame poor snail, he will die of hunger till next year. a great Haiku though. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/20/2021 3:53:00 AM

Patience in the way of a snail.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/19/2021 10:20:00 PM

Love this Victor. I like snails actually. Such quiet, harmless little creatures. Nice job and love the pic. God Bless, JB

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/19/2021 7:03:00 PM

Slow road to Apple. Great haiku Victor

Silent One

Date: 4/19/2021 1:40:00 PM

Now this is s real haiku...nice one victor

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/19/2021 12:20:00 PM

A cute one Victor!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/19/2021 10:50:00 AM

Your charming haiku captures the interest and imagination, Victor. It also has humor. Best wishes for the contest. :D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2021 7:02:00 AM

At least he keeps on tugging. LOL..I think he will eat his way up the hill, arrive late and decide to go back down. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara