For Edward Ibeh's This Or That, Vol. 40 Poetry Contest / posted 8/17/26/ Title chosen is Slow Sink
Since you . . . I go to bed; you’re on my mind and I can’t sleep a wink Sun rises, and all day long it’s about our time together that I think You smile at me and all my woes vanish in a blink My dusk seems painted more now in violet and pink Your kisses are the sweet red wine so eagerly I drink My body moves next to yours . . . we’re utterly in sync With you as my muse, my pen keeps running out of ink! My heart so overflows with joy you’ve brought me to the brink . . . If your love were water, my heart would be a wonderfully s l o w s l o w sink
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