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Slow Motion Milky Way...

sometimes I just climb into my mind's hollow tree home where pointless worries are not so overgrown and poetic words bloom in a verbal tree orchard and those without a lover's lullaby are no longer tortured where unanswered questions can easily be contemplated and the swirling milky way time is no longer accelerated

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/11/2009 10:02:00 AM
wow..
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Date: 5/11/2009 6:50:00 AM
I love those opening lines...."climbing into my mind's hollow tree home" ....we all need to escape our worries....and find that place...(sometimes it is a hard climb, however)... Nicely done, Luke!!!
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Date: 5/10/2009 8:54:00 PM
I like this - good write... good choice of words...
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