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Slow Motion Milky Way...

sometimes I just climb into 
my mind's hollow tree home
where pointless worries 
are not so overgrown

and poetic words bloom 
in a verbal tree orchard 
and those without a lover's lullaby 
are no longer tortured

where unanswered questions
can easily be contemplated
and the swirling milky way time 
is no longer accelerated

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/11/2009 10:02:00 AM
wow..
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Date: 5/11/2009 6:50:00 AM
I love those opening lines...."climbing into my mind's hollow tree home" ....we all need to escape our worries....and find that place...(sometimes it is a hard climb, however)... Nicely done, Luke!!!
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Date: 5/10/2009 8:54:00 PM
I like this - good write... good choice of words...
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