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sliver of moon shines deep blue sky dotted with stars.... fall''s stillness surrounds

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2024 7:21:00 AM

- A lovely haiku, Sara :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2024 3:01:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate the smiles and hug. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 12/1/2024 7:18:00 PM

Such a delightful scene of the night sky when the moon sheds silver light and stars shine like jewels all across the firmament. Beautiful haiku, dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/2/2024 3:47:00 AM

Valsa, that crescent sliver of a moon was beautiful that night. I like that you used the word firmament. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/16/2024 1:53:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your beautiful "sliver" Haiku write/sky picture. This weekend is a full moon. Enjoy the pretty night sky with blessings................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/17/2024 3:26:00 AM

Yes, I enjoyed walking out on the porch to see the super beaver moon a few days ago. It was so close to the earth that I could almost reach out and touch it. Thank you, Paula, for the visit. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/1/2024 11:17:00 AM

Lovely!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/1/2024 3:06:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K

Jeanette Swan

Date: 10/30/2024 2:49:00 AM

Lovely: a big sky night made bigger by stillness. At first I read silver by mistake, then sliver - I like that they were interchangeable. Apparently that sliver of moon is in mirror image in the southern hemisphere! J :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/30/2024 4:39:00 AM

Yes, Jeanette, the two words silver and sliver can be confusing especially so to a person who has something called dyslexia. The moon is waning (getting smaller) and directly opposite to the sun, so the sun is shining on the bottom of the moon right now. Your visit was uplifting. Sara K

Paul Bell

Date: 10/29/2024 9:53:00 AM

That looks very serene.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/29/2024 1:33:00 PM

Thank you, Paul. I appreciate the visit. Sara K