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Margarita Lillico

Slippery Slope

 Wild weather worked a wicked prank;
Bankrupt I went, then sank and drank.
To be more precise 
Funds melted like ice,
Deposited in the wrong bank.

December 27, 2020

Copyright © Margarita Lillico | Year Posted 2020

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January 11, 2021 at 4:09 AM

It must have been the last stimulus check. A sad one. Congrats on this winner. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

January 10, 2021 at 12:07 PM

a very clever one, Margarita! Congrats.

January 8, 2021 at 3:42 PM

love your take on the winter theme, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

January 8, 2021 at 11:39 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement.

January 8, 2021 at 7:26 AM

Congratulations on your win, Margarita!

Linda Alice Fowler

January 8, 2021 at 5:56 AM

Congratulations on the win Margarita! Linda

January 8, 2021 at 4:09 AM

Margarita, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick, the last line made me laugh!

January 1, 2021 at 9:56 AM

Congrats on your win Margarita..

January 1, 2021 at 4:55 AM

Good lesson in this winning Limerick. Congrats Sara

January 1, 2021 at 3:13 AM

Your limerick was very original. I love a Limerick. I also enjoy writing them. This is one of my favourites. Congratulations on your win.

December 31, 2020 at 10:31 AM

Nice Limerick, Maggie, good luck if this is far a contest. Hugs.

December 28, 2020 at 10:39 AM

My grandfather had the same experience before the FDIC insured $100,000! Aloha! Rico

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