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Slinky

It slunk downstairs as we all watched, Delighted and amazed. Of course, it couldn't climb back up But none of us were fazed. 'Cause it was also fun to see it Puddle hand to hand, The back and forth so cool, though why I still don't understand. They still sell Slinkys in the stores But silver is passe. They're plastic now and every color's There in the display. It warms my heart, though, that a toy My childhood self once knew Was cherished all those years ago And by my grandkids, too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/18/2017 11:39:00 PM
I had a lot of fun with that toy, too. Nice work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/17/2017 11:43:00 PM
My slinky slank in twisted turns. A painful lesson a little child learns. When they play with their slinky too rough. And when they ask for another, tough. :) Pet rocks, hula hoops, slinky's, go figure huh? :)
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Date: 2/17/2017 3:52:00 PM
A seven for this perfect rhyme, reminding me of my own innocent time ;) xomo!
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Date: 2/17/2017 3:47:00 PM
I always wanted a slinky but we lived in a bungalow at the time lol - my cousin had one and I loved to play with it when we visited - great memories Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/17/2017 3:06:00 PM
I almost remember the song, "It's up and down and all around, everyone knows it's Slinky" Well, something like that. Nice one Ilene.
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