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In delightful repose, with my tired head comfortably at rest upon your lap. Your fingers softly brushing my brow and cheek; your smiling face, with all the love in it, beaming down like bright afternoon sunshine to further illuminate mine; my slice of Shangri-La! Submitted for... Surprise Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier Date written: 05/16/2021

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Date: 5/20/2021 4:05:00 AM
What a charming poem, many congratulations on your win hugs Jan x
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/20/2021 5:16:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jan:-)
Date: 5/19/2021 11:20:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your articulation of a little slice of Heaven on your plate! Enjoyed this romantic write of loveliness.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/20/2021 5:41:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and visit, Sam:-) I'm glad you enjoyed it, my friend!
Date: 5/18/2021 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day...................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/18/2021 11:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paula:-)
Date: 5/18/2021 5:36:00 AM
BIG congrats my friend. Glad to see this charming poem honored with a podium win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/18/2021 6:12:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-) I appreciate it, my friend.
Date: 5/17/2021 11:38:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/18/2021 2:28:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj:-)
Date: 5/17/2021 10:31:00 PM
Love blossoms! Congrats on your win, Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/18/2021 2:28:00 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-)
Date: 5/16/2021 11:31:00 AM
Love is alive in this write. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/16/2021 11:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Regina:-)
Date: 5/16/2021 10:17:00 AM
Cool, serene and tender emotions and helps to reinvigorate them. a gentle and tranquil Poem; I enjoyed reading it
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/16/2021 11:34:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful feedback, Lassad:-) Blessings...
Date: 5/16/2021 8:20:00 AM
No better repose than where love finds Shangri-La. Charming and romantic!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/16/2021 9:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-) Most appreciated.

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