Home » Poems » Heidi Sands » Slice of Glory

Slice of Glory

Slice of Glory A crescent moon hangs in the winter sky A shiny slice of glory to the eye Its brightness guides the way across the snow As I glide through all that I love to know Its tilted smile, shines happy in the dark Inspiration spreads, from this single spark While standing on frozen snow and ice, The moon smiling at me, has ways to entice Every bit of my being, here below To dance until I see a moonbow Heidi Sands 1/11/19

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 2/10/2019 10:26:00 AM

Glad to see this moving up, hope it continues.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2019 4:47:00 PM

Oh, thank you for letting me know. I appreciate your kind comment and support Sandy :)

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/12/2019 9:02:00 PM

The moon stirs something in us doesn’t it! I love the title. The imagery.. I can smell the cold crisp air...and dancing and “moonbow”... magical write :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/13/2019 7:20:00 AM

It is great to hear you like this one P.S. Thank you :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 1/12/2019 2:33:00 PM

A beautiful verse. I can picture you dancing under a crescent moon. Love it!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/12/2019 3:26:00 PM

I am happy you love this one Sandra ! Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/12/2019 7:33:00 AM

A crescent moon atop winter's magic..quite a scenic view you depicted in your poem, Heidi. A beautiful poem..a joy to read.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/12/2019 7:45:00 AM

It was beautiful to see Vijay! Thank you very much :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/11/2019 7:45:00 PM

Hi Heidi, such a wonderful little write. The moon, how it can inspire the poet's heart, it certainly has yours, my friend. Your wonderful words paint a beautiful canvas. Excellent. A fave Heidi. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs,,,,Mike. XX

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2019 7:49:00 PM

It can be so inspiring! Thank you Mike. I am happy you consider it a fave!. Enjoy the weekend :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/11/2019 7:32:00 PM

Your lovely poem is as enchanting as a moonbow, Heidi, a visual poem to inspire one's imagination of a winter night's delights. Beautiful! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2019 7:37:00 PM

I am happy to read your kind comment Susan. Thank you :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/11/2019 7:22:00 PM

Awesome! Not only are the rhyme and flow good, but the images you create of the crescent hanging in the sky and you on the snow and ice below are captivating. A fave for me! Best wishes, Carolyn

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2019 7:25:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn. I am happy to hear your feedback! I appreciate you considering it a fave! Have a nice evening :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/11/2019 7:08:00 PM

'A moonbow' I love it Heidi! I have seen one here on the northshore. You have entitled this perfectly as it describes this little gem wonderfully! : ) xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2019 7:09:00 PM

That is so nice Connie! Thank you for leaving this comment :)