Sleepy Love

Candles burned bright richly warm
ambience mellow and red
with love I touched his hot hand
when soft snoring heard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 11:49 AM
Congratulations Tahera on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 12:28 PM
The last line makes me smile!!! :)
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February 6, 2011 at 5:41 AM
Very nice , all the words warm each line the same..Congrats to you on this piece of art....luv Michael
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 10:04 AM
OH, yes, I remember this. How nice it scored big. Love the humor of this one. Luv, Andrea
Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 5:11 PM
Another great submission, Tahera. Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.
Johnson Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 5:04 PM
Congratulations on your big win. Surprised by last line. Love, Joyce
Calhoun Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 2:50 PM
I liked this. Sentimental and softly inviting. Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
Poet Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Witty work here Tahera!Nice image!Congrats on your well deserved win ---kashinath
Richards Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Another wonderful win for you Tahera....this was lovely, cute, and funny! All rolled into one! :)
Fraser Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 11:01 AM
A most delicate poem Tahera, many congrats on your win in the contest....:)
Ruebel Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:12 AM
Hello Tahera, Just wanted to stop by and say Congratulations on your win. This is so well done. I love it! As Always, Shar
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February 4, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Your delightful poem made me smile, Tahera. Men aren't the only ones who snore. Last night I dreamt I could hear myself snoring. You painted a lovely image, dear, and I'm so glad to see your poem rank high in the contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 8:05 AM
Congrats Tahera on your big win in the RED contest with this exciting entry my friend .. great to see u sitting at the top with luv..
Freeman Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 6:08 AM
Great to see you at the top Tahera. Enjoy, Agape, Moses
Onclaud Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 1:31 AM
so smooth, tahera.. congrats on the win.. :) huggs, nette
Roberts Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 11:26 PM
love this humorous entry, congrats on your second place win in my contest Tahera
Sweetheart Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 5:40 AM
Sweetly visual and hotly passionate Tahera my friend.. luv your title.. so cool for a hot entry .. good luck with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 11:59 PM
hahahaha. you did it. YOu combined humor and love both. I think this is the first one that I saw like this. It should score high, Tahera. LUv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 9:22 PM
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