Sleepy Love

Candles burned bright richly warm
ambience mellow and red
with love I touched his hot hand
when soft snoring heard

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/22/2011 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations Tahera on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 12:28:00 PM
The last line makes me smile!!! :)
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Date: 2/6/2011 5:41:00 AM
Very nice , all the words warm each line the same..Congrats to you on this piece of art....luv Michael
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Date: 2/5/2011 10:04:00 AM
OH, yes, I remember this. How nice it scored big. Love the humor of this one. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/4/2011 5:11:00 PM
Another great submission, Tahera. Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.
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Date: 2/4/2011 5:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win. Surprised by last line. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 2:50:00 PM
I liked this. Sentimental and softly inviting. Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:50:00 PM
Witty work here Tahera!Nice image!Congrats on your well deserved win ---kashinath
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:49:00 PM
Another wonderful win for you Tahera....this was lovely, cute, and funny! All rolled into one! :)
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:01:00 AM
A most delicate poem Tahera, many congrats on your win in the contest....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:12:00 AM
Hello Tahera, Just wanted to stop by and say Congratulations on your win. This is so well done. I love it! As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:57:00 AM
Your delightful poem made me smile, Tahera. Men aren't the only ones who snore. Last night I dreamt I could hear myself snoring. You painted a lovely image, dear, and I'm so glad to see your poem rank high in the contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:05:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your big win in the RED contest with this exciting entry my friend .. great to see u sitting at the top with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:08:00 AM
Great to see you at the top Tahera. Enjoy, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:31:00 AM
so smooth, tahera.. congrats on the win.. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:26:00 PM
love this humorous entry, congrats on your second place win in my contest Tahera
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:40:00 AM
Sweetly visual and hotly passionate Tahera my friend.. luv your title.. so cool for a hot entry .. good luck with luv..
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:59:00 PM
hahahaha. you did it. YOu combined humor and love both. I think this is the first one that I saw like this. It should score high, Tahera. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/1/2011 9:22:00 PM
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