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Sleepy Love

Candles burned bright richly warm ambience mellow and red with love I touched his hot hand when soft snoring heard

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2011 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations Tahera on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/8/2011 12:28:00 PM

The last line makes me smile!!! :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/6/2011 5:41:00 AM

Very nice , all the words warm each line the same..Congrats to you on this piece of art....luv Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2011 10:04:00 AM

OH, yes, I remember this. How nice it scored big. Love the humor of this one. Luv, Andrea

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 5:11:00 PM

Another great submission, Tahera. Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/4/2011 5:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win. Surprised by last line. Love, Joyce

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/4/2011 2:50:00 PM

I liked this. Sentimental and softly inviting. Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kash Poet

Date: 2/4/2011 12:50:00 PM

Witty work here Tahera!Nice image!Congrats on your well deserved win ---kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/4/2011 12:49:00 PM

Another wonderful win for you Tahera....this was lovely, cute, and funny! All rolled into one! :)

James Fraser

Date: 2/4/2011 11:01:00 AM

A most delicate poem Tahera, many congrats on your win in the contest....:)

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/4/2011 10:12:00 AM

Hello Tahera, Just wanted to stop by and say Congratulations on your win. This is so well done. I love it! As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/4/2011 9:57:00 AM

Your delightful poem made me smile, Tahera. Men aren't the only ones who snore. Last night I dreamt I could hear myself snoring. You painted a lovely image, dear, and I'm so glad to see your poem rank high in the contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2011 8:05:00 AM

Congrats Tahera on your big win in the RED contest with this exciting entry my friend .. great to see u sitting at the top with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 2/4/2011 6:08:00 AM

Great to see you at the top Tahera. Enjoy, Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/4/2011 1:31:00 AM

so smooth, tahera.. congrats on the win.. :) huggs, nette

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/3/2011 11:26:00 PM

love this humorous entry, congrats on your second place win in my contest Tahera

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/2/2011 5:40:00 AM

Sweetly visual and hotly passionate Tahera my friend.. luv your title.. so cool for a hot entry .. good luck with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2011 11:59:00 PM

hahahaha. you did it. YOu combined humor and love both. I think this is the first one that I saw like this. It should score high, Tahera. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/1/2011 9:22:00 PM

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