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Sleepwalking Angel

Finally, my little girl is sound asleep after multiple bedtime stories, I plea that she will not make a peep. Hugging her favourite teddy bear ever so close the blissful sight is as precious and delicate as a blossoming rose. The soft murmurs of her magical breath console me. At last, I can rest upon my alluring bed where I long to be. Pleasurably my heavy head allows itself to fall, every muscle in my body relaxes and my eyes begin to flutter as I stare at the wall. All are contently safe and sound fast asleep, unfortunately, this blissful peace shall not keep. A spine chilling creek sends a booming echo throughout the hall, my eyes flicker open while my mind wakes itself up to protect my all. The distasteful racket continues to speed up my heartbeat, distressed I grab a flashlight refusing painful utter defeat. The flashlight sends a ray of a saviour into the pitch black hallway, my sleep deprived eyes focus on the bright figure in dismay. The sweet little angel before me moves forward using unimaginable stealth, still softly snoring and babbling sweet nothings to herself. I stare in amazement as she manoeuvres about the house with ease, with loving open arms reached out in case she falls to my displease. With little direction, my little star is directed back to her bed where she shall have the dearest dreams play out in her head. For the rest of the night, I lay awake longing to hear her creek, constantly tiptoeing into her room to get a reassuring peek. The sun eventually rises along with a bright smiling face, she asks me how she slept and I pull her in for a tight embrace. July 26, 2018 Sleepwalking Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton 5th Place

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Date: 8/1/2018 8:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Haley Fisher
Date: 8/16/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thanks Susan for your kind words. Haley
Date: 7/31/2018 1:10:00 PM
Aww, such a lovely poem this is, showing us the true love of a mother, how you sacrifice your sleep so that your daughter may sleep in peace and hw yu constantly check in on her, sleepwalking sure is dangerous, many congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Haley Fisher
Date: 8/16/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thanks Faraz. Yes, the love of a mother is one of a kind. Haley
Date: 7/31/2018 10:12:00 AM
Haley, back to say congrats! John
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Haley Fisher
Date: 8/16/2018 7:37:00 AM
Thank you for your support John :)
Date: 7/31/2018 9:54:00 AM
Congrats Haley!
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Haley Fisher
Date: 8/16/2018 7:37:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate it. Haley
Date: 7/27/2018 12:02:00 PM
What a precious, feel good story.. Haley!!
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Haley Fisher
Date: 7/27/2018 8:24:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 7/26/2018 3:44:00 PM
This is super sweet!! Just so long as they sleepwalk in safety!! Can you imagine if a kid did this and fell down some stairs or something?
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Haley Fisher
Date: 7/27/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. Yes that is a scary thought for sure.
Date: 7/26/2018 1:31:00 PM
Haley, this is such a sweet story, I love the last two lines. Good luck in the contest. John
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Haley Fisher
Date: 7/27/2018 8:14:00 PM
Thanks John. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 7/26/2018 12:38:00 PM
I can identity with this Hayley having had three daughters. Lovely verse . Good luck. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/28/2018 4:37:00 PM
Oh I sure did, got a bad back too from all the piggy backs lol
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Haley Fisher
Date: 7/27/2018 8:14:00 PM
Thanks Tom. You must have read a lot of stories :)

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