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Sleepless

awake until endless hours of the night precariously unhinged vulnerable spirit Submitted on March 9, 2018 for contest MARCH 18 PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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James Inman

Date: 4/19/2018 7:17:00 AM

Very nice, very emotional.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/19/2018 12:53:00 PM

Thank you, James, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/10/2018 11:35:00 AM

Isn't about all of us... nicely done. Good luck

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2018 3:33:00 PM

I wouldn't wish a lot of nights like these on anyone, Pashang. To tell the truth, I usually sleep like a baby.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/9/2018 1:22:00 PM

So insomniactico cool this poem be, Line. Been in this condition many a muse time. Artfully expressed poem. Love and peace always.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2018 1:37:00 PM

Thank you so much for your visit, Freddie. Appreciate your visit and comment.

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/9/2018 12:33:00 PM

You've perfectly portrayed the condition, Line, Good Luck in the contest xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2018 1:20:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and comment, Mike. Much appreciated.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 3/9/2018 11:49:00 AM

That was darkly beautiful, thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2018 1:20:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for leaving a message, Kyle. Much appreciated.