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This sonnet came to me, whilst I was unable to sleep a few nights ago.

It seems you only appear whilst I am asleep, teasing rapid eye movement to awake and weep. You hide, so I wonder how beautiful you must be, fulfil my desires and give me the chance to see. I believe you have beauty, eyes have never seen, which allures me to places I have never been. Maybe you were sculpted by Michelangelo's hands, DaVinci drew you a smile only he understands, Rembrandt's hand trembled at the sight of your grandeur, maybe you are the one, Raphael's angels adore. Your image mirrors Cleopatra's unique class, which fades at daylight, regrets begin to amass. I do not know your name, Silent remains the tongue, yet I fondly believe in my heart you belong.
Silent One 23 May 2018

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Date: 10/23/2018 9:02:00 AM
Lovely imagery sculpted gracefully from your pen
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Date: 10/4/2018 8:56:00 PM
I can feel the chill of romance in this awesome creation
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Date: 6/20/2018 8:53:00 AM
Wondrous piece!
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Date: 6/9/2018 1:09:00 AM
Oh my Cleopatra awake for I long since await your touch to light up this space of mines. Nicely done.
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Date: 6/7/2018 8:57:00 AM
Beautiful romantic Sonnet - all about the intrigues of loving a Sleeping Beauty! Well done, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/6/2018 10:04:00 AM
I concur wholeheartedly, a wonderful sonnet of beauty and devotion, glad your dream became reality, like mine 23 years already!
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Date: 6/1/2018 6:23:00 PM
Hello Silent One, this is a beautiful Sleeping Beauty poem. I enjoyed it. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 5/29/2018 6:41:00 PM
Ahhh sweet dreams of one so beautiful described as a work of art!
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Date: 5/29/2018 12:36:00 PM
This sonnet by any measure is a true gem my friend. Exceptional in my humble opinion! A great one to fav....
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Date: 5/28/2018 2:09:00 PM
Wow!! Incredible write, ZZ. Absolutely love it. Another FAV!
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Date: 5/28/2018 6:41:00 AM
I notice your pen name in this poem. So clever!! Overall fantastic poem. -JWE
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Date: 5/27/2018 8:15:00 AM
Ohh! Its so wonderful! What a Beautiful description!
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Date: 5/26/2018 2:43:00 PM
perfection! Loved every word...missed you my dear friend...…………..:):):)-lullloooo
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Date: 5/25/2018 10:08:00 PM
A lovely sonnet, Silent! The beauty through each artist’s hands.
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Date: 5/25/2018 11:38:00 AM
Such a beautiful dreamlike quality to this poem. Perhaps one day...you will find her. Thank you for sharing this dream with me. Elaine
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Date: 5/25/2018 10:35:00 AM
A wonderful return to action my friend, well done...
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Date: 5/24/2018 7:52:00 PM
Oh, there is such a deep longing in this poem, Silent One. And I can relate to the way the words came to you just before you fell asleep. It's in that alpha state that we write our most creative poetry. Outstanding! A fave for me. (May both of us find the one we are seeking.) Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2018 6:03:00 PM
You got it man...Good to see the star shining here again...Keeping the vibes high...Nice write...I feel it too... All the best SO
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Date: 5/24/2018 4:50:00 PM
Great way to break your silence! You have described the perfect woman, who probably does not exist J <3
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Date: 5/30/2018 6:49:00 AM
I found mine at the age of 19, lol... We both got there in teh end Tommy...
Date: 5/24/2018 3:50:00 PM
Encountering such a beautiful goddess, even if in dreams, must be the envy of many, S-1. Beautifully written. Regards // paul
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Date: 5/24/2018 9:10:00 AM
Wow! Silent , You have penned such a well written Sonett. Good content and rhythm. I enjoyed how you incorporated all of "painters" in this fine piece. The poem and the "lady" are beautiful. Well done. PS, Welcome back my friend. I missed your pen and your unique style:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/24/2018 7:58:00 AM
Very nice, S O. I'll bet she would have "beauty eyes have never seen" if her portrait had been painted by each of those four guys. I'm glad you didn't add Picasso.
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Date: 5/24/2018 5:24:00 AM
Wow, sculpted by the hands of Michelangelo, painted by the Masters DaVinci and Rembrandt, adored by Raphael s Angels, and bringing it home with Cleopatra's class would be every woman's desire to look like this woman, every man's fantasy, not just in his dreams but reality. A beautiful sonnet Si, a well crafted masterpiece. Good to see you back...Maria
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Date: 5/23/2018 8:57:00 PM
The imagery is fabulous and the theme amazing, SL, enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 5/23/2018 8:35:00 PM
The beauty of your poetic lines are beyond Heaven, Silent One. Tender longing and emotional imagery flows flawlessly and gracefully in your masterful poem. 'Rembrandt's hand trembled at the sight of your grandeur, maybe you are the one, Raphael's angels adore' - such poetic magnificence!! So great to see you back!! You've been missed.. ~Susan
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