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Let me tell you a story . . . It happened long ago and once upon a time in an enchanted forest, This is the story of Sleeping Beauty of the Woods, but not the Grimm tale; of your childhood, oh no, this one is completely but not totally different. Now, the King of the woods, King Wind and the Queen, Queen Rain, Had a beautiful girl child and she was known as Princess Nature; She had seven fairy godmothers, there was Wit, fairy of changing skies, Grace, of rippling streams, Dance, of falling leaves, Song, of the birds, and; Music, of each new dawn, and of course there was Night, of dreams, And the last fairy was called Magic . . . Oh I forgot, there was an eighth fairy, an evil one, called Winter. That evil fairy, Winter was so jealous and mean that she cast an enchantment, On Princess Nature, that should she prick her finger on a thorn; She would die, but the seventh fairy, Magic reversed the curse somehow, The Princess would not die should she prick her finger but fall asleep; Asleep for one hundred years, and could only be awakened by a certain kiss. The woods was a lovely place of emerald green and hanging mosses, but also there were places of brambles and thorns, and one day, sadly; Princess Nature pricked her finger on a thorn and fell into a deep sleep. The woods became quiet and nothing moved, winter and frost came; It covered everything and the woods froze for one hundred years. Then a Prince came through the tall trees, he had heard of these woods, Heard the story of the sleeping Princess, and his name was Prince Spring; He cut through the ice with his sun sword and soon found the Princess, Kneeling he kissed her and she awakened and the woods awakened too. And of course, they married, and lived happily ever after... _________________________ January 27, 2016 Poetry/Narrative/Sleeping Beauty - Once Upon A Time Copyright Protected, ID 16-749-715-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Your best Poem From Any Laura Loo Contest Sponsor, Laura Loo First Place __________________________________ Written for the contest, Once Upon A Time, sponsor, Laura Loo Second Place

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Date: 9/18/2016 5:55:00 PM
Broken Wings, you stole my heart the first time and did it again-beautiful story told here and congratulations on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo
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Date: 2/9/2016 11:53:00 AM
Love it well done x
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Date: 2/9/2016 12:11:00 PM
Wendy, thanks for the love and the compliment !
Date: 2/7/2016 10:49:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win! :-)
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Date: 2/8/2016 12:05:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate ~
Date: 2/7/2016 6:26:00 PM
Anytime
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Date: 2/7/2016 2:49:00 AM
Well done, BW, a lovely piece. Viv x
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:14:00 PM
Viv, thanks for the compliment and the lovely !
Date: 2/6/2016 11:44:00 PM
Thanks for the reply
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:15:00 PM
Your Welcome
Date: 2/6/2016 4:23:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful "Once Upon A Time Win!!!" Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:43:00 PM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations, the wonderful and the Luv ~
Date: 2/6/2016 2:46:00 PM
Wonderful take and beautifully written poem, BW. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:08:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, hugs to you too !
Date: 2/6/2016 12:37:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win
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Date: 2/6/2016 1:51:00 PM
Joseph, thanks so much for the congrats, appreciate !
Date: 2/6/2016 11:25:00 AM
enchanting story well told, constance.. super congrats on your fine spot!..huggs
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Date: 2/6/2016 1:52:00 PM
nette, thanks for the congrats and the enchanting and hugs !
Date: 2/6/2016 11:07:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2016 1:52:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the congrats and the hugs XX
Date: 2/6/2016 10:57:00 AM
Broken Wings, thank you very much for being apart of my contest, the last stanza was awesome :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 2/6/2016 1:54:00 PM
Laura, thank you for the great inspiration and for my awesome placement, it was fun to write a fairy tale in a different way !
Date: 2/3/2016 8:38:00 PM
Broken Wing, I love your theme of the Once Upon A Time tale. a 7 Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/3/2016 8:42:00 PM
Eve, thank you for visiting my poem and for the love, the 7 and the hugs!!!
Date: 1/30/2016 2:45:00 PM
So lovely and entertaining, Constance! Your imagination and creativity had a field day:) To be honest I prefer your take to the original, perhaps because it's more poetically orientated. ~ paul
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Date: 1/30/2016 2:55:00 PM
Paul, thank you for visiting my poem and for the lovely comment, I am so grateful for that ~
Date: 1/28/2016 7:00:00 PM
I dropped by to read this beautiful poem once again! :)
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:15:00 PM
Arthur, thanks for the once again visit and for the beautiful ~
Date: 1/28/2016 3:27:00 PM
Love your tale, BW. Especially like the names, they fit the characters really well.
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:08:00 PM
James thanks for visiting and for the compliment !
Date: 1/28/2016 12:19:00 PM
Congrat.To live in a fairy tale... Mihail Sadoveanu has a wonderful and touching story called Fancy`s Fairy (building roman ,thus told in other story called Wonderful Grove) in which a Prince looks for her all his life. He met her once (when he had believed in fairy tales)...
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Date: 1/28/2016 2:07:00 PM
Ovidiu, thank for visiting my poem with that great comment, appreciate so much !
Date: 1/28/2016 8:05:00 AM
A lovely story...enjoyed
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:07:00 AM
Joseph, thanks for visiting and the lovely !
Date: 1/28/2016 5:41:00 AM
wow, the narration's well written BW, excellent, the imaginations are thrilling...best of luck in the contest
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Date: 1/28/2016 6:38:00 AM
Sage, thanks so much for the wow and the excellent and the thrilling, I do hope this is okay for Laura's contest ~
Date: 1/28/2016 2:25:00 AM
I love your totally unique take Broken Wings this is enchanting - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 1/28/2016 6:39:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the love and the enchanting, gosh I love that word and of course for the hugs !
Date: 1/27/2016 10:44:00 PM
Oh Broken Wings this is so enchanting and beautiful. loved this "but not the Grimm tale; of your childhood, oh no," this is an A7 for me, hugs!
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Date: 1/28/2016 6:40:00 AM
Arthur, oh thank you so much for the compliments, I was not sure about this one being okay for the contest, but I wanted to do a twist on the grimm tale, and thank you for the 7 and the hugs !

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