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Sleeping Baby

My sleeping baby Your breath whispers quietly I love watching you.

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Date: 3/25/2017 7:55:00 AM

Either very sweet or very creepy, depending on who the "baby" is :) Lovely piece, though!

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/25/2017 12:24:00 PM

My babies were definitely the very sweet variety!

Date: 3/19/2017 8:38:00 PM

You've captured what every loving mother does in a few short words Elizabeth, just lovely

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/20/2017 2:08:00 AM

So love blissfully sleeping babies. Thank you.

Date: 3/19/2017 3:11:00 PM

This is quite a lovely and serene image which you present, Elizabeth. I agree...one can spend ages watching a sleeping baby! Regards // paul

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/19/2017 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Paul for visiting and commenting. Used to love watching my sleeping babies.

Date: 3/17/2017 8:54:00 AM

Beautifully written

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/17/2017 9:56:00 AM

Thank you

Date: 3/15/2017 3:24:00 PM

How adorable this is!

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/16/2017 1:33:00 AM

Thank you. A long ago memory, my "babies" are so big now!

Date: 3/14/2017 3:12:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Elizabeth, well written, Roy. :)

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/14/2017 5:18:00 PM

There is something quite beautiful about watching your baby sleep. Thanks for commenting Roy.