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So close, so close the sound, I hear but cannot see within a scene,too surreal for me I run, I run away in slow motion,so slow time stands still,my frozen legs will not go the scream, the scream so loud, this cry I ought have known a voice of despair echos- my own about, about,it shouts, I turn and stir..awake- then doze..asleep I drift into my dream

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Date: 6/15/2020 7:23:00 AM
This is brilliant. I feel blessed coming across this page. You have it in you, I will definitely come visiting again to enjoy the blessing of your deep mind. A great piece!
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Date: 6/15/2020 8:02:00 AM
Cheers Funom,thanks

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