Sleep Disorder

Morning came and dad was sad
his sleep had been a tad bad
	he smiled a frown
	thought up was down
nightmares had driven him mad!
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Wolf Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 7:09 PM
I'm trying to smile a frown, with no luck. Perhaps I'm upside down. Smiles, Gershon
Fowler Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 6:13 AM
Careful, someone might think you've a bad tic. Thanks for coming by gw.
Cunningham Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 11:58 AM
Since I gave up cheese before bed I no longer get chased by a physchopath wielding an axe lol Tom
Fowler Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 2:02 PM
LOL Tom. I try to keep the psychos at bay as well, especially those wielding a sausage and cheese tray! I Hope your week is going well. :) Linda
Buhagiar Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 9:28 AM
Loved your limerick.
Fowler Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 10:16 AM
Thank you Victor :)
Rhymer Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 7:08 AM
Had a dream the other night I turned around to see my husband holding a long handled brush to scrub a boat with .The end was at least four inches square that he was holding overhead like an axe about to hit me in the head with.Sleep and dreams a trip to the free movies or down nightmare lane....
Fowler Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 7:10 AM
Hi Vickey. LOL Sleep is an interesting use of time. Thanks for visiting and commenting :) Linda
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