Slaughtered Innocence

The hideous and the humble
Blood peppers falling snow
As world hurtles to the tipping point
Life chokes on ignited air
Wrenching love from hungry mouths
Stars fall without sound
Some weep helpless, day through night
Ever wondering how
Never knowing why ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 12:48 PM
this is a deep excellent pen patricia this world has been turned upside down with hate and war wishing you a blessed week
Graham Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 5:34 PM
Thanks Liam. You were one of the first poets to strike me when I first came on here - which proves you just get better and better with time!!!
Mehta Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 8:30 AM
Interesting thoughts on depression with nice title, Patricia
Graham Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Thanks Dr Ram. War is also at the heart of this but I ran out of word choice, choosing the softer options I think maybe because one always harbours hope for the suffering ...
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