Slapped

When my mom delivered me, she and I both screamed. Dad said, the doctor slapped both of us!

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Date: 2/15/2022 9:14:00 AM

Good one Anil! Thanks for the laught. Prayers & Blessings ~ Debra

Date: 2/12/2022 3:28:00 PM

So delightfully funny, Anil. There's an under current of tongue in cheek cheekiness to your humorous 2 liner. Congratulations! Brian

Date: 2/11/2022 8:55:00 AM

A super capture of a moment in time so meant to be sounded out in a poem!

Date: 2/11/2022 4:12:00 AM

Oh! The little boy had to believe that funny lie. Lol :-D

Date: 2/10/2022 11:10:00 PM

The doctor has been too cruel ..... ! Slapping you is OK, but why should he slap your poor mother who suffered such severe birth pangs.... :)

Date: 2/10/2022 10:47:00 AM

Humorous write and yet sets us to wondering… I love this! I would characterize this as light verse or free verse.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/10/2022 2:42:00 PM

Listen, Anil, I understand. I have a hard time scrolling through the subjects too. <3 K8m

Anil Deo
Date: 2/10/2022 12:01:00 PM

II thanX Kim, guess I was lazy to scroll through FORMS ... I do manage with a modest cellphone. Peace blessings

Date: 2/10/2022 8:14:00 AM

lol that is really funny, way to go Anil

Anil Deo
Date: 2/10/2022 12:02:00 PM

ThanX dear Vie. Smile

Date: 2/10/2022 4:33:00 AM

Chuckling! Nice Brother Anil!