Slammed Out Bam

Slammed  out  Bam

For a moment I will fantasize 
Lead him  on a trip
Make him realize 
this is more than a strip
boy you got to recognize
you have to get a grip
We play a game of spin the bottle
With you my guts slowly drip
Kiss me I (ain't) your average model
over the edge I rip
Look who's playing the sensitive

Take me in your arms 
Fold me like a blanket
Kiss me you fool
Spread me like a blanket
Stop teasing, no need to be pleasing
You got it all wrong
turn down that song
Suddenly your taking your time
Are you okay, are you fine
All the motions are sinking in deep

I can feel it
A bowel movement traveling all up inside
Violently pushing "get out of my way!!"
to many butterflies, what can I say
you took to long
Now it feels wrong
Just shake it off
I want my dignity back 
I've tighten my muscles
forget about the snack
To late, it already died
Tomorrow neighbor a game  of truth or dare
We can  enjoy a second  ride
Do not come with directions or affections
Or you'll get another rejection
A cold shower my friend
It's time for me to go back to my husband.

  S.K.A.T. POETRY
 
P.S. NOT REAL, IMAGINATION,, IRMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/16/2014 10:16:00 PM
SKAT What a creative and fun write. You told a story that kept the reader intrigued and fascinated till the end. Thanks for the great comment on my Hateful Heart poem. Hugs
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Date: 11/7/2013 3:43:00 PM
this was so amazing when i read it it took me there i was living the moment , very clever from u , u got it all girl good luck i hope i can get as far as u did , wow thanks for that
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Date: 7/26/2013 9:43:00 AM
Wadafu! Irma. Muito nice.
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:48:00 PM
The intensity of annoyance described at it's best with ...bowel movement! and end it with a cold shower at the end for you must go back to your husband. Lots of wit and transparency in the write... n thank you for your sweet remarks on..who cares..God bless...regards, rinki.
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Date: 8/7/2010 11:10:00 AM
boy,i sure hate it when that happens hot and cold,indian giver after selling your soul good write but frustrating
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:13:00 PM
much fun! Irma! I enjoyed this fun ride! jimbo
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Date: 6/8/2010 10:34:00 AM
Oh my! What a write. Ha!
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Date: 6/7/2010 3:31:00 PM
next time give me a clue. jhl
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Date: 6/6/2010 4:55:00 PM
no not yet, till later. see you, nice little slam. hhhmmmmm????,..sid
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Date: 6/6/2010 3:06:00 PM
great imagination put to use!...well done.
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:56:00 AM
Had me going with this one...until the bowel movement. I love the simplicity of statement, and the way you express it. Dan C ps. I do not know how to get to your blog, but put a poem in for your state contest.
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Date: 6/1/2010 4:17:00 AM
Wow, SKAT! A funny one, I'm impressed! Thank you for your comments. "Die Katze am Fenster" is the German version and for sure the Spanish version looks a bit like French because it is also a Romanic language. My French is too poor to write also in that language. But Italian and Spanish are closer. Have a great week...Gert
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Date: 5/29/2010 3:49:00 PM
I love it ;) I like in that poem that it's so visual, sometimes it's funny and i's just good ;)
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Date: 5/29/2010 1:21:00 PM
"Just shake it off." Oh, I love that. Ha,ha,ha,ha. I can't quit laughing. I used to be a teacher - one of my mistakes - A boy said to me one day, "I have to go to the bathroom." A girl said, "Just tie a rubber band around it." Irma, you are the greatest. Love, daver
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Date: 5/27/2010 11:40:00 AM
Wow, Irma...enjoyed the humor in this imaginative piece...how are you..have been real busy..I'm off today and am enjoying the poems! Love, Audrey
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Date: 5/27/2010 8:24:00 AM
SOUP MAIL ..sweetie BBF from BBF ..luv..
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:50:00 PM
a very interesting slam indeed--keep 'em coming, am enjoying reading them (though I have yet to get the hang of writing it!) I wonder what would happen in the 2nd ride???
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Date: 5/25/2010 2:28:00 PM
good one reminded me of my Love Laced...so where is my Eve from you little girlie? ;) I bet you your teeth are real white and pearly, from all those shiney apples you been eating, and the sweet sounding snake who you've been a greetin....so give me a primal Eve with more swagger than jive...let us see primordial woman as she was when alive!!!
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Date: 5/25/2010 12:34:00 PM
hot slam. i really enjoyed it s.k.a.t. sexy. sexy. sexy.
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Date: 5/25/2010 9:11:00 AM
Just saying "hi" to my BBF today ... be back home this Saturday.... luv ya.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:39:00 AM
Very nice... quite the prolific writer it seems.... thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry! Cheers:)
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Date: 5/25/2010 6:49:00 AM
Interesting; very interesting! This is some kind of slam here. May be I should start going to more of these. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/25/2010 5:16:00 AM
Great write, SKAT! enjoyed reading it today and thank you for your kind comments! Have a great week and keep writing!...Gert
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Date: 5/25/2010 1:33:00 AM
P.S. I enjoyed this one Irma ;)
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Date: 5/24/2010 11:20:00 PM
hmmm, that BM part, weird. hahaha. Very interesting one, Irma. And I thought the ending of this was hilarous. Gosh, if you can't get it good even outside your marriage or even in your imagination, Hmmmm. hahaha. LUv, andrea ps. So, Irma, about the dog dream, are you saying something like that happened to you too?? Tell me in a soup mail about it if it's true!! LUv, andrea
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