Slam Went the Screen Door

SLAM... went the screen door March winds come blowin' on through scattered thunderstorms

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Robert Pettit

Date: 4/9/2021 4:03:00 AM

That has happened to my screen door a lot this year. Nice write.

Anna M Shepard
Date: 6/1/2021 11:04:00 AM

There has been a lot of wind, and it didn't stop with March. Repairing the screen door has become a regular thing. Glad you enjoyed. Have a blessed day.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/31/2021 7:39:00 PM

I can see it and hear it!

Anna M Shepard
Date: 6/1/2021 11:01:00 AM

I try to portray the imagery, in my verse. So glad you enjoyed.

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/29/2021 7:24:00 PM

Nice haiku, Anna! Blessings, Kim M

Anna M Shepard
Date: 3/30/2021 12:12:00 PM

Thank you. I write what I live. Have a blessed day.