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Sky Song The sky’s a song from night till dawn. a scheme of light to please the sight, rainbow of treasure giving pleasure to gaze upon and dream beyond with colors so phenomenal, azure so infinitesimal that change so strange to rearrange. Bleak clouds soon came forecasting rain. Violet glad mixed with ominous sad. Gray clouded view blocked the sight of blue, a strong clue wet weather was due. The pewter sky spoke and came awoke with a soft thunder, rolling under and a weakened sun that tried to come. No storm alarm not dusk or dawn and then a few gold rays came through. The rain drop pink is gone and think a pretty day in every way a moon lit night aglow just right with a sky song to gaze upon. Toward the skies are our watchful eyes that look to see what the day will be. 2/14/18

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Date: 3/2/2018 7:42:00 PM
Charming poem, Sian. Congrats on your win. Well done.
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Date: 3/1/2018 6:09:00 PM
Returning with congratulations on your excellent win with your rhythmic poem of vivid imagery..
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Date: 2/28/2018 11:11:00 AM
beautiful imagery and LOVE the rhyme scheme. That's how I like to write also. thank you and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
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Date: 2/18/2018 5:44:00 PM
Such exquisite imagery, Janis! Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 4:17:00 PM
Your lush imagery, rhythmic flow and outstanding rhymes elevate your poem to beyond heaven.. Congratulations Janis on your wonderful first place win! ~Susan
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Date: 2/18/2018 4:12:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win with this lovely poem, Janis :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:18:00 PM
- Congratulations, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:52:00 AM
The imagery in this just left be breathless... congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Silent One
Date: 2/18/2018 12:31:00 PM
I don't think it would make a difference of this one Janis...
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/18/2018 11:55:00 AM
Thanks. Glad I didn't write 20 verses this time.
Date: 2/15/2018 12:23:00 PM
- Lovely poem, Janis - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/18/2018 11:55:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise.
Date: 2/15/2018 9:32:00 AM
Nicely done ...
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/18/2018 11:55:00 AM
Thanks, Probir.

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