Sky

Sky, so simple and demure when yellow brushes blue hid in amber hue Wisps a wind calm carried long white puffs of day float by breaths of passion cry She winks her love befell a fold slowly moving closely through grandeur shines anew Secrets held a spinning orb shots seen round the world lovers dream unfurled Sky, so simple and demure you'll always be so true

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Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 9/23/2017 11:29:00 AM

I like it. I love the interminable blue sky. Nice work.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/1/2017 8:29:00 PM

fantastic, Tim, your golden pen and your beautiful mind has come with another beautiful verse..... Hugs dear friend ~`*

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/1/2017 4:22:00 PM

astounding portrait of the sky, tim.. i like!..huggs

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/1/2017 2:54:00 PM

This is really good Tim...

Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2017 12:27:00 PM

awesome imagery and i love the personification Tim, written through the eyes of a true poet:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/1/2017 11:40:00 AM

Now thats amazing imagery! :)

Tim Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 12:29:00 PM

Like Trump says you're fire...d

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/1/2017 10:48:00 AM

I love this :) I worship the sky. Fave. xomo!

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/1/2017 10:22:00 AM

Nicely done Timmy...enjoyed my friend...god bless...^WW^

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/1/2017 10:02:00 AM

Very poetic--lovely theme!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/1/2017 9:02:00 AM

I love this one Tim! I am happy I found it to read today. A favorite! :)

Darren White

Date: 9/1/2017 8:44:00 AM

Good morning my friend. I'll do sun, or moon, your choice :)

Tim Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 8:46:00 AM

I'm in love with the moon so there you go : )

Lin Lane

Date: 9/1/2017 8:38:00 AM

Your personification floats on those clouds across the sky. I've never really thought about it as having gender. I love winks and this new one by you.

Tim Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 8:46:00 AM

Thanks Lin

White Wolf

Date: 9/1/2017 8:35:00 AM

Excuse me while I kiss the sky! Beautifully, poetically stated, Tim! Now that you have done "sky" I shall do "wind." For they are lovers also

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/1/2017 11:44:00 AM

That leaves me with either water or fire!

Tim Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 8:37:00 AM

Yes, blow me away Budgie