Sky

Sky, so simple and demure 
when yellow brushes blue 
hid in amber hue 

Wisps a wind calm carried long 
white puffs of day float by 
breaths of passion cry 

She winks her love befell a fold 
slowly moving closely through 
grandeur shines anew 

Secrets held a spinning orb 
shots seen round the world 
lovers dream unfurled 

Sky, so simple and demure 
you'll always be so true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 9/23/2017 11:29:00 AM
I like it. I love the interminable blue sky. Nice work.
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Date: 9/1/2017 8:29:00 PM
fantastic, Tim, your golden pen and your beautiful mind has come with another beautiful verse..... Hugs dear friend ~`*
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Date: 9/1/2017 4:22:00 PM
astounding portrait of the sky, tim.. i like!..huggs
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Date: 9/1/2017 2:54:00 PM
This is really good Tim...
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Date: 9/1/2017 12:27:00 PM
awesome imagery and i love the personification Tim, written through the eyes of a true poet:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/1/2017 11:40:00 AM
Now thats amazing imagery! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 12:29:00 PM
Like Trump says you're fire...d
Date: 9/1/2017 10:48:00 AM
I love this :) I worship the sky. Fave. xomo!
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Date: 9/1/2017 10:22:00 AM
Nicely done Timmy...enjoyed my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/1/2017 10:02:00 AM
Very poetic--lovely theme!
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Date: 9/1/2017 9:02:00 AM
I love this one Tim! I am happy I found it to read today. A favorite! :)
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Date: 9/1/2017 8:44:00 AM
Good morning my friend. I'll do sun, or moon, your choice :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 8:46:00 AM
I'm in love with the moon so there you go : )
Date: 9/1/2017 8:38:00 AM
Your personification floats on those clouds across the sky. I've never really thought about it as having gender. I love winks and this new one by you.
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Lin
Date: 9/1/2017 8:35:00 AM
Excuse me while I kiss the sky! Beautifully, poetically stated, Tim! Now that you have done "sky" I shall do "wind." For they are lovers also
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/1/2017 11:44:00 AM
That leaves me with either water or fire!
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 8:37:00 AM
Yes, blow me away Budgie
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