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Skittish of Prophetic Noise

‘We played wedding songs, and you didn’t dance, so we played funeral songs, and you didn’t weep’ Luke 7:32b Scribes and Pharisees, lean in. They lean away, their fingertips at play, nimble, with no paper cut. The pipers toot out a jig and they scowl; then a dirge and they skirt. Skittish of prophetic noise, they amble for their toys and go on walkabouts to gather up the fish before the net goes out. Digits, hush, or like the dastardly, wiggle about underhandedly. Scribes and Pharisees, at the skirt of the Savior, don’t recognize his mild behavior; they criticize. Whereas, one woman chances to believe, to receive power to be healed of her infirmity; Pharisees harrumph to repeal - “not on the Sabbath!” The scroll rolls out like a red carpet, snatched back up. It is only for the designated driver to enforce. And enforce with force, he does; take his pill. Chill while each stays blind, lame, deaf, demonic. The wise that hide their eyes in Jesus’ hem, go left and right, on the narrow. Miracles and forgiveness of hidden rose petals. Heaven is dung to those who would rather cling to popularity, religiosity, to their perfect life. And what will they have at the end of the dusty trail. No one to listen to them. Will every day be like a Sabbath, where they aren’t allowed to pick up their mat and escape through heaven’s gate? Yet, they shall see the walk of their enemies, piled high smiles, the light before darkness, fire and brimstone, hell to be exact. Never again will they catch a glimpse of what they lost, though they try to unscramble their minds, lost to forever time, without a save.

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Date: 11/19/2024 12:35:00 AM
Wow Kim what to put..?? I'll try' i recieved hints.' Flashes of thought pictures parables in ernest! I have had the odd nudge?? Over 10 years? But Last week the 'floodgates opened' and I was allowed to put some pieces into a corner of the Jigsaw.' About the tree of knowledge what type it was' and spiritual significance that the pharisees were blind to So to put it.Anyway from this revelation A song has come.' Its being worked on now I may send you an early take if you wish? Once Its put together'
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Joe Maverick
Date: 11/19/2024 12:37:00 AM
Further to the earlier..this poem you have done ties in With my revelation so well.' The holy spirit is our glue i Must consider.!!
Date: 11/18/2024 4:08:00 AM
i don't know much about biblical "stories", i think everyone must respect the positive messages included, don't know about hell either, this is beautiful poetry that touch the soul, thanks poet KIm
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2024 9:04:00 AM
Thank you for your kind and respectful comment! I appreciate you, Yann!
Date: 11/17/2024 6:06:00 PM
Biblical and deep, your poem reminds us of strict doctrine. I enjoy how you reworded it in a poem. This is an excellent verse.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2024 9:03:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda!
Date: 11/17/2024 12:23:00 PM
Your work is very brutally honest. A poem we all can consider, truly- I love that story in the Bible about the woman who said "If I can but touch His garment"- a wonderful reference for this poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2024 5:21:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 11/17/2024 12:14:00 PM
The Pharisees were the worst. Deep writing, Pangie. Wow I don't remember that Bible quote you showed. It's quite striking
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2024 5:21:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! ~ Kim
Date: 11/17/2024 12:00:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your minute message about how the Scribes and Pharisees could not be pleased with either funerals or weddings. It is the same way today in some religious settings. Thanks for the visit to my page and for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2024 5:22:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 11/17/2024 11:39:00 AM
- Powerful, Kim - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2024 5:22:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/17/2024 11:08:00 AM
Brutally honest yet poetically palatable. In the grand finale, don't expect the clergy to fare well. Look for the honest, humble, hungry to prevail - Matthew 5:5. Great write
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2024 11:20:00 AM
Clergy are held to the highest account. Blessings, Tom!

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