Skipping Stones

Looking for the perfect one, along the lake-front shore;
Mine resulted in ten quick skips, he wants his to skip one more.
I watched the mirror of myself, thirty years removed;
Trying to outdo his Dad as if something that would prove.
He squats and examines each stone he finds looking for one smooth and flat;
My boy is growing into a young man – into a fine one as a matter of fact.
He picks his stone and sidearm throws it against the water’s surface top;
I counted eight but yelled, “Thirteen!” when that stone came to a stop.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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K. Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 9:53 AM
What a very sweet write this is, very endearing to read this story of father and son, Joe-- always enjoy your heartwarming writes-- congrats for being in the winners' list with this beauty
Devonshire Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Joe, this poem is incredible. Shows so much about how parents want their children to fare better in life than they do. Loved that last line. Gosh, all the entries for this contest are so good. I would have been hard-pressed to judge and rank them. Congratulations on your success! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Stones" contest Joe. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 7:04 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of rick, Joe
Sweetheart Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 8:57 PM
Congrats Joe on your HM in the Stones contest.. another rare beauty entry luv..
Dailey Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Great write - congrats on the HM in the contest. I see I will have to try a lot harder to measure up to your success. Mike
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June 8, 2011 at 2:14 PM
A wonderful write Joe, I enjoyed the read. The addition of one more fond memory, best to you~ Caryl
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