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June-24-2024

Double Double Words to Bubble Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Joseph May

S kiing on this snowy peak over the icy stretches is a real tes T, K eeping legs on the skis securely firm and standing hig H. I tching to experience the adventure of my endeavou R, I go down hills in rising vigor, never losing grip, shouting ‘h I’ N ot shaken by the steep landing with wind giving me a chilling fee L, G aily I speed down the icy slopes in triumphant thril L.

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Joseph May

Date: 7/7/2024 5:23:00 AM

Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely done

Valsa George
Date: 7/7/2024 5:29:00 AM

Hi Joseph....Thank you so much for placing my poem in the top list. Feel so delighted.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/6/2024 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Double Acrostic write. If I tried it, I would kill myself. Hahaha!!! Have a great day/weekend..............

Tonye George

Date: 6/25/2024 9:00:00 PM

Love structure Dear Valsa. Profound as always. Memories are made to be remembered. Your fun time and happiness flowed through your piece. Adventures are lovely but I never have the chest for them. Best wishes for the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2024 1:23:00 PM

Awesome work. I had fun doing mine and I can't wait to see all the winners when they appear. I did not post mine yet. I don't even have time to type up the three poems I wrote by hand the other day. I can't even keep up with comments here. haha

Ink Empress

Date: 6/25/2024 11:03:00 AM

Dear sweet valsa! Youv nailed this form! Iv actually been skiing once in swiss alps, mont blanc and was not a good experience for me as i cant skii hah! So that first line really did bring back those memories! And i love how this one flows too. “ N ot shaken by the steep landing with wind giving me a chilling fee L,” i felt the adrenaline rush of a person doing just that as i read that line! How creative is this. You always writ on various themes just so very well! A fave this is for me! BoL

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/25/2024 9:25:00 AM

Nicely penned acrostic. Skiing is a funny word that your poem brought to thrills.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/25/2024 5:20:00 AM

Wonderful composition, Valsa:)

Silent One

Date: 6/24/2024 1:34:00 PM

This seems a bit short for your normal type of poem.. It is an imaginative acrostic which creates real imagery.. Best of luck in the contest..

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/24/2024 11:34:00 AM

Dearest Valsa, this is indeed a well crafted double acrostic! Wonderful images! Nicely done! And, as a former ski instructor, I can feel the wind, the exhilaration and the triumph of each successful run! Time to start getting ready for next season! Blessings dear friend! Thanks for the trip down the slopes.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/24/2024 11:33:00 AM

Do you really ski? Quite the enjoyable sporty a rostic!

Valsa George
Date: 6/25/2024 1:23:00 AM

I have just watched others skiing and that too only once. Kim, here we don't have snow.

Jay Narain

Date: 6/24/2024 11:13:00 AM

Great Acrostic. Enjoy skiing in non snowy native land.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/24/2024 9:43:00 AM

What a creative/great Acrostic write. I have never been skiing. Guess I would kill myself. Hahaha!!! "Good Luck" Have a great/blessed day................

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/24/2024 9:15:00 AM

I have never been skiing, though I do have relatives that ski often, and love it. Well said. Thrilling write. The slippery slope of poetry.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2024 7:27:00 AM

Wonderful work. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. When I was young, I might have enjoyed skiing but not anymore. LOL..Too breakable. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/24/2024 5:42:00 AM

This is a wonderful acrostic, with each line using the letters at the beginning and end of each line. Very well done. Blessings.