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Skies Ablaze

Skies ablaze, day is done Dying rays, setting sun Embers sink in the sea One last wink let it be Light will fade, darkness shrouds Flight of birds above clouds 8-10-2021

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2021 2:12:00 PM

I adore this one! FAVE

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/16/2021 5:49:00 AM

Perfect flow with this poem. Well done :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/14/2021 3:37:00 AM

Love this gossamer succinct poem, Joseph. Your ethereal words are light as a dove's feather. Love and more love to you and yours forever.

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/13/2021 11:25:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this.... Delighting and delightful. God bless you.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/11/2021 11:19:00 AM

Hello Joseph May, i like the way you described the sky at the end of the day. Enjoy your day my frienjd.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/11/2021 6:05:00 AM

This is so so well written, Joseph. Into my FAVES.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/11/2021 1:52:00 AM

This is a beautiful example for your contest, Joseph, I'm sure I can't match this one:) I'm overawed:)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/10/2021 10:12:00 PM

Another example for your contest?

Eve Roper

Date: 8/10/2021 9:38:00 PM

great imager, Joseph,

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/10/2021 7:14:00 PM

Could be sunset, yet i feel the awful fires out of control around the world, when reading this. Regardless of that, love the poem.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/10/2021 6:42:00 PM

"One last wink, let it be" So delicate and tender. Your words caress softly around me and my heart. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy