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Skies Ablaze

Skies ablaze, day is done
  Dying rays, setting sun

 Embers sink in the sea
 One last wink let it be

 Light will fade, darkness shrouds
 Flight of birds above clouds

 8-10-2021

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Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2021 at 2:12 PM

I adore this one! FAVE

Heidi Sands

August 16, 2021 at 5:49 AM

Perfect flow with this poem. Well done :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

August 14, 2021 at 3:37 AM

Love this gossamer succinct poem, Joseph. Your ethereal words are light as a dove's feather. Love and more love to you and yours forever.

Beata Agustin

August 13, 2021 at 11:25 PM

Thanks for sharing this.... Delighting and delightful. God bless you.

Vijay Pandit

August 11, 2021 at 6:05 AM

This is so so well written, Joseph. Into my FAVES.

Joanna Daniel

August 11, 2021 at 1:52 AM

This is a beautiful example for your contest, Joseph, I'm sure I can't match this one:) I'm overawed:)

Victor Buhagiar

August 10, 2021 at 10:12 PM

Another example for your contest?

Eve Roper

August 10, 2021 at 9:38 PM

great imager, Joseph,

Harry Horsman

August 10, 2021 at 7:14 PM

Could be sunset, yet i feel the awful fires out of control around the world, when reading this. Regardless of that, love the poem.

Brandy Nicole

August 10, 2021 at 6:42 PM

"One last wink, let it be" So delicate and tender. Your words caress softly around me and my heart. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy

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