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Ski Chalet

Slippery hills in this snowy week 

Knees bent; more speed needs a tweak.

I’ll snowplow, turn skis stop in stance

In and out like an ice-ballet dance, 

No turning back on a bunny slope!

Gripping tightly up-hill to the tow rope.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Anaya Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 11:14 AM
HONORABLE MENTION/ Acrostic Skiing Poetry Contest/ Sponsored by: Julia Ward
George Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 9:04 PM
This is a beautifully written acrostic. "No turning back on a bunny slope! Gripping tightly up-hill to the tow rope". There should be such precautions to prevent a fall as it is a risky sport !
Anaya Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Gasun Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 3:59 AM
Wow! You brought me in a very delightful vicarious experience of skiing after reading your acrostic poem my dear friend Anaya. Make me wish to have a snow here even once. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. hugs
Anaya Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 10:00 AM
Thank you, Len! Hugs
Ward Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations!
Anaya Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 8:50 AM
Thank you, Julia! I am honored to have a placement in your challenging & fun contest. ~Anaya
Fowler Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Heya BFF! Lovely imagery in this winning piece Anaya. Congratulations on your win! :)
Anaya Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Thanks BFF! Congrats on yours! Love your: "that delicious flying sensation"
Horsman Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 8:58 AM
So lovely the poem, more so., as it's just reach 40 degrees here in Perth Australia that around 107 in F
Anaya Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 11:13 AM
I'm enjoying the cold weather. The long summers are harsh here. Stay cool in Perth Australia, dear Harry!
Parker Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Good luck with that, Anaya. ~;o]
Anaya Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Thank you~;o]! ~ ;D
Woodrow Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Great descriptions of the learning experience- took me back to those days..first it was me, then my daughter and then my son…now they zoom past me and I am thinking of a fire and a drink inside a chalet :)
Anaya Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 3:45 PM
You did it right, family first, Susan. I was late to the party, my boyfriend was a traditional type, [Swedish], hot chocolate for us! Gloves and jackets hang by the fire to dry!
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 2:45 AM
Aw still on the bunny slope Anaya, plenty of snow around the Tahoe area I believe, but you might need a plough to get there Nice acrostic, Now listen up! Julia put up a blog about spacing between the first and second letters, your poem might be discarded if the formatting is not as required, she’s pretty strict so be worth checking it out, cheers David
Anaya Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 7:01 PM
I think she meant...S_K_I_I_N_G. I checked her example "Skis"
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 11:37 AM
Just checked out Pine knob ski resort, looks a great place for a greenhorn like me to try out my own embarrassing skills, don’t forget to space out your poem!
Anaya Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 11:08 AM
The first skiing experience, it was embarrassing! But let me tell you, 5 years later--[Pine Knob Chalet] MI. CC, downhill, moguls...hey thanks for the heads up...glad Julia is back!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 11:07 PM
Lovely acrostic on skiing. I could almost feel the run down the slope. Best for a win.
Anaya Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 3:47 PM
True story! :D
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