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Skeet

'Mosquito Pete' (or 'Skeet') for short A seasoned guy, the strangest sort It was the only name we ever knew His story known by very few A weathered old maverick on a country lane A bit peculiar, not at all ashamed He never said much, or went anywhere Kept close to the vest, with a certain air We are the neighbors who lived down the road We heard many stories, he liked to reload He knew what the sun was intending to do Why the gray clouds curled, why the sky was blue He would talk of Nebraska, hogs and grain But mostly about crops, the frost, or rain Standing alone, on a sun-drenched day Out in the field, he would call to the Jay He'd look to sky, horizon in his gaze transfixed for an hour, as if in a daze There were hints of a past, within seasoned eyes and we wondered if somewhere, he had known other skies But lightly, as the blossoms cling, the years swung around Tapping on his shoulders, until his songs were sung A maverick barely known, for many a year ...but today, his stories have all ended here We see an empty farmhouse, and with a sad disbelief... Surprised, and unexpected,..immense in our grief For the story that begun over eighty-plus years ago there is much,... too much, that we will never know Who was Skeet...the man that had no name? Does he have a proper name? something different to exclaim? Engraved upon a stone..........what could his name be? Now, "Skeet" will have to do.....for all eternity....... ___________________ For the contest sponsored by Mystic Rose .....................................................................................................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/8/2014 1:44:00 AM
An excellent poetic adventure, just thinking what is in a name? He seems to have his own fashion of fame. My great grandfather's once grand home sits in ruins from weather damage and neglect on a farm in Kansas, so your story really touched me. Kudos on a wonderful win!
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:50:00 PM
Carrie, you write with such insight into the people and places you describe. Your poem made me remember other old characters from my past...besides me. lol Congratulations.
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:43:00 AM
I'm sure he enjoyed your company. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:35:00 AM
So lovely Carrie! Amazing take n wonderful win! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/7/2014 1:03:00 AM
Many congrats on your win Carrie:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2014 12:22:00 AM
I love this... amazing. Thanks and Congratulations. With love & prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/6/2014 8:10:00 PM
A very heart warming poem Carrie. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/6/2014 7:31:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN
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Date: 3/15/2012 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2012 1:09:00 PM
Good to see the result here Carrie."
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Date: 3/14/2012 6:41:00 AM
I understand this poem. Many of us have unmet 'friends' or people we appreciate just being, but are not connected to in any way. It's the familiar, the frequently seen.... this poem really touched me, Carrie. Congrats on the win. Judging was really hard with this one! If you can, stop by my new blog, Cyndi
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Date: 3/13/2012 9:42:00 PM
congrats arrie on a brilliant write and win for Maverick contest luv..
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Date: 12/2/2010 2:59:00 PM
So many people touch our lives. This fictional character would make a great Hallmark hall of fame episode. Vince
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Date: 3/23/2010 5:28:00 AM
What a grand imagination you have, my poet friend. The story sounds true! Congratulations on your success in The Life Of A Fictitious Person contest sponsored by: Matt Caliri Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/22/2010 6:09:00 PM
thanks you for comment and congratulation too you very nice reads like some one you know the character in mine made up of many from history of amercan indians
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:50:00 PM
Very interesting- Congrats Carrie
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:46:00 PM
Very interesting and mysterious Carrie. congratulations on your win. and thank you for commenting on mine. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:13:00 PM
Superb writing, Carrie. Quite a compelling tale of "Skeet," a mysterious man. Congrats on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2010 2:31:00 PM
what a great story of this man name skeet, his mere mere image was told with a beat. I wonder to why his voice came defeat. congrats! much enjoyed your poem!
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Date: 3/11/2010 6:58:00 AM
He sounds so real! Excellent writing, Carie! Good luck in the contest
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Date: 2/24/2010 5:31:00 PM
enjoyed, there are so many people that go by a bb or cc name that people don't know when they die.
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Date: 2/23/2010 5:42:00 AM
The best of best............excellent Carrie........Charma
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Date: 2/23/2010 2:57:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian
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