Sixty Years Ago

I remember as if it were yesterday
But really it was nigh onto sixty years
Not his face or height or body build somehow
I remember his attitude__character

For his character was one of adventure
One not held to any standard but one of
Freedom of spirit and body and soul __mind
His body showed evidence of this tough 'tude

Over his left eye he wore a strange black patch
Even though he had in his possession a glass eye
He could donn if he wanted to impress__ ladies
In his damaged hand he carried the wood cane

Well first let me tell you about the injured eye
At one time in his life a nail flew backwards
Landed right in that left eye...worked odd jobs 
This character that I remember so well

Then that damaged hand was drawn nearly closed
Another one of those odd jobs__saw milling
Cut that hand nearly into on that huge saw 
Back then there wasn't much a doctor could do

Now the reason for the wooden cane carried
Got drunk one night and crashed his Model T car
Gas spilled everywhere even onto his pants
And he needed to roll his Prince Albert__match

Here was this man  unbroken __ a character
I remember this until now___ sixty years 
Have passed and it is as plain as day to me
He never changed never saw the need__ just died

Oh! I did not tell the rest of the story
I guess that I will have to save that__later
I have responsibilities I have keep
On another day I will tell the last__tale

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/20/2010 6:01:00 PM
Your talent at story telling shines through. You captured me with every word. -Josh
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2010 7:57:00 PM
Oh, I was really enjoying this one, and then you got me with the ending! Fantastic write. A real joy to read.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2010 6:41:00 PM
Okay Sara, ..you got me goin'!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2010 6:34:00 PM
well thats scary. a nail flying into his eye.oh my gosh. and i don't even want to get started with his hand.he seemed to hide it with the attitude you portrayed him as. now i wonder what the rest of this tale is, i really am thinking, he sounds like a pirate! -Always&Forever Lynette
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2010 3:00:00 PM
Terrific poem Sara, the measuring is superb. Its up with your best and beyond. Thank you so much for your emails >> The Highlander
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2010 10:29:00 AM
Chilly on this one did he still work his but off, thank you for your comment.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2010 7:18:00 AM
good job---mom you are getting better.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2010 7:05:00 AM
Recollection and Reflection all in one beautiful poem.. enjoyed Sara ... u have long to go before writing the ending... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2010 6:01:00 AM
A nice recollection. I enjoyed the last quatrain
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2010 5:40:00 AM
Hello Sara that's a very interesting poem Six Years Ago I was sitting on the edge of my seat I wanted to also write you, and say Thank for reading my work it means a lot to me when another poet sees my work. I hope to be able to communicate with more poets on this site take care, and god bless you Patricia.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2010 4:26:00 AM
poor man, bad luck followed him, thanks Sara for the story, hope to hear the ending soon,..p.d.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter