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Sixty Years Ago

I remember as if it were yesterday But really it was nigh onto sixty years Not his face or height or body build somehow I remember his attitude__character For his character was one of adventure One not held to any standard but one of Freedom of spirit and body and soul __mind His body showed evidence of this tough 'tude Over his left eye he wore a strange black patch Even though he had in his possession a glass eye He could donn if he wanted to impress__ ladies In his damaged hand he carried the wood cane Well first let me tell you about the injured eye At one time in his life a nail flew backwards Landed right in that left eye...worked odd jobs This character that I remember so well Then that damaged hand was drawn nearly closed Another one of those odd jobs__saw milling Cut that hand nearly into on that huge saw Back then there wasn't much a doctor could do Now the reason for the wooden cane carried Got drunk one night and crashed his Model T car Gas spilled everywhere even onto his pants And he needed to roll his Prince Albert__match Here was this man unbroken __ a character I remember this until now___ sixty years Have passed and it is as plain as day to me He never changed never saw the need__ just died Oh! I did not tell the rest of the story I guess that I will have to save that__later I have responsibilities I have keep On another day I will tell the last__tale

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/20/2010 6:01:00 PM
Your talent at story telling shines through. You captured me with every word. -Josh
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:57:00 PM
Oh, I was really enjoying this one, and then you got me with the ending! Fantastic write. A real joy to read.
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Date: 4/27/2010 6:41:00 PM
Okay Sara, ..you got me goin'!
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Date: 4/27/2010 6:34:00 PM
well thats scary. a nail flying into his eye.oh my gosh. and i don't even want to get started with his hand.he seemed to hide it with the attitude you portrayed him as. now i wonder what the rest of this tale is, i really am thinking, he sounds like a pirate! -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:00:00 PM
Terrific poem Sara, the measuring is superb. Its up with your best and beyond. Thank you so much for your emails >> The Highlander
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Date: 4/27/2010 10:29:00 AM
Chilly on this one did he still work his but off, thank you for your comment.
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:18:00 AM
good job---mom you are getting better.
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:05:00 AM
Recollection and Reflection all in one beautiful poem.. enjoyed Sara ... u have long to go before writing the ending... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/27/2010 6:01:00 AM
A nice recollection. I enjoyed the last quatrain
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Date: 4/27/2010 5:40:00 AM
Hello Sara that's a very interesting poem Six Years Ago I was sitting on the edge of my seat I wanted to also write you, and say Thank for reading my work it means a lot to me when another poet sees my work. I hope to be able to communicate with more poets on this site take care, and god bless you Patricia.
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Date: 4/27/2010 4:26:00 AM
poor man, bad luck followed him, thanks Sara for the story, hope to hear the ending soon,..p.d.
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