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Six Relatives

Every Sunday after church
Old great-aunt Dora
Full bloodied Cherokee,
In her finest dress and fedora,
Drove her pink Cadillac
To the San Joaquin River.
She would stop in the same place
And sat on an old stump,
Under a camphor tree,
By the riverbank,
And would cast her fishing pool,
Drinking her moonshine liquor.

Old widow lady of ninety-two;
My dear mother-in-law
Lives by herself 
With nothing else to do.
She sits in her chair 
Next to the window
And stare out for hours
With dreams of her past.
She carries a small chrome plated,
Stud nose 22, pistol 
With white pearl grips
In her purse.
Don't get in her way,
At the grocery store,
She will ram her cart
Into yours and say,
"Sorry I didn't see you."

Then there’s my sister.
“She’s crazy as a Loon; 
Howls at the moon,”
My husband would say.
Her long-distance relationships 
All in her mind. 
Her husband 
Doesn’t seem to mind,
But watches over her shoulder
When she cooks,
To make sure 
Everything she uses 
Is clean before he eats.
Their two daughters 
Walked the same path.
Live in a world 
Of hallucinations 
And delusions,
In denial 
Of their illness 
Of schizophrenia.

11/19/2020


Six Relatives Poetry Contest
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Date: 12/1/2020 1:44:00 PM
Hi Eve! It was fun reading about Great Aunt Dora and your mother in law! They sound like they keep you on your toes! You say Aunt Dora lived near the San Joaquin River? So do I. I live in Fresno. Do you live around here? If so, what a small world! Congratulations on your first place! Your new poetry sister, Jennifer
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Date: 12/1/2020 12:06:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on a deserved win. Such a great write!!! Wow! Love it. God bless you once again
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Date: 12/1/2020 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. I know there is a book in this poem. Enjoy your wonderful win and day with a hug.............
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Date: 11/20/2020 1:22:00 AM
Lovely poem Eve, best of luck to you x
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Date: 11/19/2020 10:10:00 AM
Hi Even, This is a good entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/19/2020 8:58:00 AM
Amazing entry for that contest... such a wild and wonderful collection of characters!!!! A jumble, tumble and humble ride through your wonderful poetic creation. I love this. It is a fave and a fun one at that - God bless you
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Date: 11/19/2020 5:58:00 AM
- Do not "joke" with mother-in-law ..:))) - Oh, made me think of your sister Lucilla ... always so sweet and lovely - Best wishes in the contest, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/19/2020 4:13:00 AM
This is a great entry for the contest.. show how different people are..
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Date: 11/19/2020 3:37:00 AM
Six great portraits. So well etched. Best for a win. ~~
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